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Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Common Ground

Hey man, I just wanted to drop off this review since I just caught up on the story. This is fantastic work of GTS fiction and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Chapter 8 was no exception. I love the little details that build Kristen's personality such as her getting upset with the tiny specks for being out and about when she crushed some of them. And it added an interesting twist that the message said "good", that she squished them. Nice work, keep it up! I can't wait to see where the story goes, and I really can't wait until we get out of the flashback section and Kristen starts to 'own' it.

Author's Response: We're almost out of the flashback!  Thank you Carnage for the kind words. 

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