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Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Harsh Reality

So great to see you back! I just discovered this story and it is off to a great start. I love when she begrudgingly apologizes to one of her little cities, even saying herself that it looked bad. And then when stepping through Snowfield in one of the other chapters, man, I absolutely love your writing style. Even when she realized what she had done in one of the flashbacks of chapter 5, it was so well written and fun to read. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Carnage.  I appreciate your feedback a lot.  You coming from writing such exciting stories that I have enjoyed.  I can't wait to return from the flashback section!

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