Reviewer: BitBitcoin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Hello! I had to submit a review because this story is everything that's good in this world. I love interactions with both micro and nano, (but nano in particular), the way you describe both points of view is incredible and the story itself is rather interesting. Only thing I'd like however is reference pictures for the characters, the ones in the first chapter are unavailable and there are other characters without a proper reference.

Author's Response:

Everything that is good in this world, or everything that is bad lol.  Thank you so much for the compliments.  I'll try to fix the reference pictures and add some more for characters, thanks for letting me know. 

Reviewer: Tuin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2024 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Eager to see Madelyn join the fray.

Wondering how she will react to the tinies or nanos even.

Reviewer: Giantess Nation Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

My apologies for posting this as another review, but there's no other way for me to respond to your response to my original review.

I was unfamiliar with your other story in this universe (the Grove View Apartments one), but I briefly read through it and I can see the differences between that one and this one. While the girls instantly turning evil and rapidly destroying everything does have its charm, I like the approach you are taking in this one a lot better. I like that Kristen's character gradually eases into embracing the goddess thing, and isn't some psychopath from the start. I have no doubt there are many people in real life who would be as callous as those girls in Grove View though if given the chance, but probably not most. It was also kinda disappointing the country on the rug was destroyed so quickly. It would have sucked if Kristen had destroyed Ostrov like that (which she easily could have) instead of having things gradually develop like you're doing here. This approach is much better.

I also like that there is much more interaction with the tinies, because of their ability to text Kristen on her phone. This means that even though the Micros are barely visible to her, and the Nanos aren't even visible to her at all, there is still a lot of interaction that can be done.

I still have to give you credit with the Grove View Apartments story because you catered to the extremely rare niche of shrunken countries, which I thoroughly enjoy, but it is so extremely rare. But I just wish those girls had taken greater care in their managing of those tinies. It also seemed towards they end they lost interest in them and just wanted to wash their hands of them by destroying them as quickly as possible. I hope that doesn't end up becoming the case with Kristen and co. here.

I also want to say I appreciate the background behind these cities/countries. The more they are fleshed out, the better. This along with their ability to communicate with Kristen makes them seem a lot more like humans rather than bugs. Its something I felt the other story was lacking in. For example, when Isabella ordered the micros in the box to clean her shoes it just seemed like she was ordering around bugs. She had no ability to hear their words, so the interaction was very one-sided. Maybe that explains why she lost interest in them, eh? It was still cool and all, but here in this story when Kristen makes Braithe clean her shoes it works much better, because they can communicate back to her. She knows it humiliates and degrades them, and that they're something more than bugs.

Anyway, I just want to say please don't hold back on details on the backstory of these cities/countries and the worlds they come from. For example, Ostrov seems like a pretty interesting place. A very powerful country on its world. It just makes it all the more surreal that this mighty nation ended up on the floor inside the house of this woman. The mightier these places were in their former worlds, the more of a goddess it makes Kristen that she now has them at her mercy, if that makes sense.

On the topic of the bug thing, I just realized that these people should have been dealing with the micro-biome that lives on Kristen's skin, and which has been raining down on them for all this time. You see, every person has billions of microscopic organisms like dust mites and so on living on their skin. These things are too small to see by the naked eye, but the Micros and (especially) the Nanos should be keenly aware of them and probably having some major problems as a result of them.

In the case of the Micros, its probably not too bad. The Micros are visible to Kristen's naked eye, but her dust mites are not, which means the mites are substantially smaller. How much smaller? I dunno. Like a small dog to them maybe? They can probably easily deal with these things just with a sharp kick. Pets might be at risk to them though.

In the case of the Nanos, this is probably a really ugly problem for them. In their case, I'd expect the dust mites and other stuff that lives on Kristen's skin to at least be on par with them in size, or probably even larger. And there would be a lot of these things raining down on their country as she walks through the room too, so you have to imagine this might be a major nightmare for them. Ostrov's people might be being killed by these things, and it might be devouring their crops, their forests, etc. Its probably a major problem for them.

But Ostrov does have its military, and fighting Kristen's microbes might be a full time job for them. But at least it gives their military some purpose for existing, since its not like they can do anything at all to Kristen, and there's no other nations for them to fight, so what else would they need to have a military for? So fighting Kristen's dustmites is their purpose now.

Not to mention if some real full-sized bug like a spider were to show up. In the case of Ostrov, they might have to resort to using full blown nuclear weapons to take it out.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_microbiome

Here's a wikipedia article about Human microbiome, basically the stuff that would be living on Kristen's (and Ginny's, etc.) body, and which the Micros and Nanos would probably have some problems with.

But I think the same principle can also work in reverse, too. What I mean to say is the Nanos are so small that they are on par in size with this stuff, and as a result they could actually live on Kristen's body and become part of her body's microbiome themselves, and without her ever even knowing it. In fact, this might already be the case, like since even the first day when she stepped down on Ostrov before she knew what it even was. If some of them managed to avoid getting squished, they might have landed in between her toes and established themselves there and eked out an existence for all this time. Who knows? They're so small the cracks in her skin would be like canyons for them to hide in. Leslie could also have some living on her too.

Just some food for thought.

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2023 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Amazing, chapter as always. Hope to see one focus on stinky feet.  

Author's Response:

I can assure you there will be a few emphatic chapters around aromas in the future.

Reviewer: Norman173 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Wonderful story, I wonder how might Kristen interact with Nanos?

Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, there will be plenty of interaction with the nanos coming in the future. 

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

The return of Panzer. It's great to see new stories from you. For the most part you're probably the leading writer in the Giga genre right now so every entry you put out is just valuable in itself! :D

I apologize I don't have much to offer in the way of critique but I did want to let you know I'm keeping up with this story when it's updated. I also will say, I've very much been enjoying the POV of the cities under Kristen. The descriptions continue to be great, a nice carry over from Grove View.  Please keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Zaximus!   More city and tiny POVs will come as I bring the story back into where we all left off in chapter 2.   

Reviewer: MysticCrunk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2022 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Thank you very much for making a return! This is a new narrative to me, but it's already off to a terrific start. My favorite part of her apology is when she apologizes so reluctantly to one of her little towns, even admitting to herself that it was embarrassing. When I entered Snowfield in one of the other chapters, I was in awe of your writing skills once again. In one of the flashbacks of chapter 5, she recognized what she had done and it was still enjoyable to read. I'm eager to see where this narrative goes. Thank you for all your hard work.

As a fan of your prior tales and a sucker for milfs, I'm eager to find out where this one goes.

Author's Response:

Thank you,  I wanted to really tell in detail how she turned into that reluctant apologist goddess milf, I can't wait to get back to writing those chapters.  I also can't wait to see where this goes because I have tons and tons of ideas I want to show people.  

Reviewer: BitBitcoin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2022 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

One of the best stories I've read in a while! The reference images are something that I'll always appreciate! 

Author's Response:

Thank you, I might add more later on for other characters, but there always could be an ownership issue.  

Reviewer: Mark2420 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2022 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

So excited to see this continued. Also really curious to see where you take it. I really like the addition of the micro country, I think lots of fun possibilities can arise from having different sizes present, whether a shrink ray is used or they're just already that size. Great stuff!!

Author's Response:

Nah, I'd say more like they were already that size, just mixed up in a cosmic accident and ended up in Kristen's room that small.  

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2022 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Suburban Mom

Well done! Haven't read a story like this that I've enjoyed in a long while. Reminds me of the quality of effort put into Cities in the Cellar and a few others. Really looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Cities in the Cellar is a classic in my opinion and one of the stories that motivated me to pick up writing in the first place.