Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well written good erotic story.  A little too much crush-centric for my tastes, but I kinda knew that going in. The one thing I really hated was the cleaning of things with their mouths - not only is it disgusting, but it's not practical or believable on any level (and we're already suspending belief on the whole shrinking thing). That level of cruelty would have the tinys revolting or committing suicide left and right. The ending left me a bit sad and disappointed - I didn't think it was worthy of all the nice buildup. I would have liked a bit of an epilogue, from the perspective of both or either Justin or Brianna, as they observed the person they knew getting crushed and with their reactions; might have even been better if we saw Brianna's POV, since we weren't aware that she watched the stream; would add an element to her personality.

Reviewer: lilsmol Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful as always. You have such a way of crafting scenarios and characters that not only heightens the realism and worldbuilding, but the unique cruelty and incredibly disheartening power dynamics. 

I really wish GTSWburg would start up a Patreon or something as I'm truly a fan of their work and only wish I could read their stuff more consistently. I think they are pretty much in a league of their own when it comes to size fiction and this story only further attests to that. There's just something so grounded about his stories, including this one, alongside all the fantastical elements, the way things are described, the attention to detail, in particular the rote, mundane, routine drudgery of simply being owned by someone who is impossibly more powerful than you with no chance of recourse, in a world where such things are ordinary and accepted...In this story, like most of his ones before it, GTSWburg really just nails so many things so right and helps immerse the readers in a believable size fantasy like so few others can.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2022 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start.  Will be interesting to see how the story goes.

Reviewer: fosmat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2022 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not now babe, new gtswburg just dropped.

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

A welcome surprise! Didn't think you'd start a new story so soon. :)