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Reviewer: RubyRoseGold Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2022 4:48 PM Title: Bad Luck

This is such a good story that I keep coming back to! The attitude of Sara, the descriptions, and the details are all so spot-on. It helps I have a massive thing for sweat and odors on feet and you do those excellently xD

Author's Response:

I'm super glad you liked it! It really motivates me to keep it up :)



Reviewer: Randomer000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2022 8:06 AM Title: Bad Luck

Nice work dude!

Good little premise, with Sara being solidly characterised and the scenario facilitating some fun foot stuff too.

I suppose it would've been cool to see where things could've gone in the aftermath of Ryan ending up within her shoe, without quickly shrinking down to nothingness. But it certainly works as a good conclusion nonetheless.

Look forward to see more from you in the future!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2022 2:50 PM Title: Bad Luck

Loved reading this, the demenor and atttitude of Sara and her total uncaring treatment towards Ryan was great.

She didn't even (knowingly) fulfill her promise of his last request XD 

But he got off....mutliple times, and in the end did die. 

I love how she lied about not hearing him in the end, just focussing on her job, not the (unfortunate) shrinking virus victim.

Great description here, loved reading the details of her feet and Ryans end. 



Author's Response:

I'm super glad you liked it! I really have a lot of fun making characters with 3D personalities, and often mean ones~ 

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review! If you want to see more of my stuff, check out my Patreon <3 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2022 2:42 AM Title: Bad Luck

I absolutely loved it

Author's Response:

Hell yeah man! 

I'm trying out a Patreon, if you ever wanted to support more writing, I'd really appreciate it! <3

Reviewer: liliannnwritesstuff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2022 12:23 AM Title: Bad Luck

Great story, I really loved Sara's attitude



Author's Response:

Heh, I'm glad! It was a lot of fun to write~ 

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