[Report This]Date: February 24 2022 12:29 PM Title: Prologue
This story has been really good so far, the build up between Eve and Hue is great.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Happy to hear that!
- Ellenoire <3
Date: February 24 2022 6:29 AM Title: Break Off
Hey this is a great start, hope to see a lot more before I can give a proper review.
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! I'll look forward to that review once I push this story a bit more forwards!~
- Ellenoire <3
Date: February 23 2022 5:40 PM Title: Break Off
Again, great work! I can tell this story will probably be a killer one. The thing I like most is that there seems to be a proper focus on the characters themselves and they seem to act and react relatively realistic given the situation. And without that realism, I wouldn't really care about any graphic/lude stuff that comes next (anyone can write semi good lude stuff alone).
I hope you continue with the realistic approach to the characters, cause if you get that right, you're bound to have an amazing story!
Author's Response:
Hah! Great to see you've stuck around! I'm pretty happy to see someone appreciate the effort I've put into the realism as, I was assured it would be my downfall. Didn't know if the development of the characters would truly interest anybody, or if they'd rather a story that swiftly gets to the point, but as you can see I'd opted for the former. As I see it, getting a feel for their personalities is what makes the further lewd interactions that much more intriguing. I hope not to disappoint with what I have in store for the future of this story~
- Ellenoire <3
[Report This]Date: February 23 2022 10:51 AM Title: Break Off
Hey Ellenoire, I just read your story and I simply HAVE to give you these five stars, I'd give more if I could!
I mean, your world building is exceptional, and made me feel everything the characters are feeling. The descriptions are just fine, showing me anything you wanna show me in its finest details (but without being too detailed it would get boring, like some stories I'd read made me feel, despite well written too...). Your work is just thrilling, and I wish I could write THAT well, like you!
I can't wait to see what happens next and how their relationship grows from now on (considering it'll relit).
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad to see you like my work to that extent~ Having read a good bit of your own beautiful writing, it certainly flatters me for you to hold what I've written so far in such high regard. I hope you stick around to follow the story along, as I'll certainly keep an eye out for pieces of your own!
- Ellenoire <3
[Report This]Date: February 20 2022 10:53 PM Title: Prologue
This story is extremely promising! The premise really intrigued me, and this chapter did a great job of drawing me in and making me excited to see what happens next. I'm really curious to see more of their dynamic, as well as how that changes once the shrinking stuff comes into play. Congrats on the great start, and I'm seriously looking forward to more! Take care~
-Pluto
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Really glad that to hear such words, as they aid quite the bit with motivation! I hope to live up to your expectations with the next chapter~
-Ellenoire <3
[Report This]Date: February 20 2022 10:09 PM Title: Prologue
Good beginning of the story, you've done a good job of setting up the characters and motivation and Eve (hope I got the name right haha) seems like an interesting protagonist! I'll stick around for chapter 2, hope to see it someday
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far! I hope not to keep you waiting for far too long as the next chapter is already well on it's way~
-Ellenoire <3