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Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2022 4:00 AM Title: A Night of Giant Proportions

Wow, that's-a spicy-a meatball! Rereading this, I really do appreciate how you describe the musculature of Maxine. Too many people like to say "toned, muscular" and leave it at that when happening upon a brick-house lady. You like to paint a picture, with just enough repetition to remind us of what an Abs-solute Unit Maxine is.



Author's Response:

Haha it was pretty intense...

I'm glad you appreciate those details, to be honest those descriptions are pretty self indulgent lol but it's good to know that someone else is enjoying them.

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2022 12:20 PM Title: A Night of Giant Proportions

Wow this chapter was worth the wait, I loved all of it especially the interaction between the two characters at the end and that part with her ass in just a thong eclipsing him ;)

Can't wait for more and I understand with elden ring haha. I just finished it myself the other day :D



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Haha yeah took me the better part of a few weeks to finish but I'm finally done with it.

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