You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?

Love the story, hope to see more like this, especially the vore.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the commetn  ^_^  one of my next stories is about vore, though it will be furry vore so it would depend on wether you're interested in that... But i'm glad you enjoyed reading :)

 

Reviewer: TinyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?

Absolutely loved it. The details were fabulous, the writing was spot-on. I actually got chills at some point. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I have actually re-written this (better grammar, an extra POV scene in the club, extended descriptions) as i'm trying to group all my work on Deviant Art now to go with my pics and other re-worked stories so if you have the time or the inclination hopefully you can come across :)   My page is here: http://harlequinems.deviantart.com/

Thanks again for leaving a comment ^_^

Reviewer: Ishigoto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?

I've probably heard the concept a hundred times over but when you go at it...you just make it almost seem a little TOO real @_@ and yet...I applaud you madame.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?

Poor guy, I was kinda hoping he'd survive and live to serve her in the future. I'd like to see one Tiny become Emma's favorite and serve her well, to the point where she almost cares about him.

Author's Response:

hi,

thanks for the reviews, i appreciate it a lot. This story has me as the main character, so the likelyhood of me ever wanting to care for a tiny is slim to none lol, i just wanted to flash that remote chance that i had something of a kind heart to be found hehe. I see your point about the girl's POV when she is being chewed on, i think in my excitement, and the fact that i finished that chapter at 4am, i kinda brushed over the intention of doing it without meaning to.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2009 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?

hey, it was okay for a first story. voring a few guys would be cool too.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.