[Report This]Date: March 21 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
If you want a sadistic story, this is it done right. I must say, it's simply great. If I had anything to complain about, it was that the vore was a little to short, but that's just personal preference/nitpicking. I think you've done an absolutely fantastic job, and I think the only thing you need to work on is just to write more, because it's positvely amazing.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for such an awesome review, i really appreciate it ^_^ I agree the vore scene was too short with this but i remember when i was writing it i was so focused on what i was going to do next i was rushing through things trying to fit in as much as possible.
I've since learnt to take my time and relish each horrible tortuous moment when killing tinies hehe ;)]
Thanks again for taking the time to comment!
Emms x
[Report This]Date: March 21 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
Pretty fantastic really, I have to sya very well written, I love everything about this to be perfectly honest, although I agree with Aborigen's second comment about maybe expanding the mouth play.
If I may be so bold, may I make a request? Could you write more using Emma? :D
Author's Response: Hi, sorry i didn't resond a lot sooner... Thanks vry much for the review, i am guilty of skipping over things quite quickly with my writing, its because my ideas go a thousand miles a minute in my head :) i will be writing with ... well, me, again shortly ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
Fun story! I like that she shrinks the creeps down and collects them. If they were decent people I'd hope that they get to share some affection with their new giantess, but because they're douches so they get what they deserve.