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Reviewer: Somesmut writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2022 3:03 AM Title: Smashed and Embedded

I personally love the detail, the idea that he himself was nothing less then a bug as he was pushed into the same corpse of said but. Amazing Ioved this part by far keep it up everything in this story has been amazing.

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2022 7:13 AM Title: Smashed and Embedded

Not gonna lie, the bug guts part was a major turn-off.



Author's Response:

I hear ya, thanks for leaving this! Tried out more gross elements last chapter between that and the gum to try to highlight the humiliation and "reality" of the situation. I'm not personally too into much of that sort of thing, however, so elements like that will likely be few and far between moving forward. Thanks for reading! 

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