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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2009 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Escape

AWESOME! A slam-bang conclusion; just the way I like a hard-boiled mystery to end. And, while I'm not surprised that Jayne got away, I have to wonder about Angel's disappearance.

I mean; I'd like to think that she was further shrunken, to micro size, by Leila's re-enlargement. What FULL METAL ALCHEMIST calls "equivalent exchange." But, in the immortal words of jazz legend "Fats" Waller:

"One never knows. Do one?"

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