Reviews For Slave #4
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Reviewer: Footslave45 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2023 4:25 PM Title: EPILOGUE

I wish I could serve goddess laci : d84;a039;

Reviewer: Feeover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 6:30 AM Title: EPILOGUE

Great little story! I love how this domineering Asian-American family takes ownership of little ones and makes them slaves. I'd fit in so well...

Reviewer: gtswburg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 7:39 AM Title: EPILOGUE

This was great! I really liked it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 3:04 AM Title: EPILOGUE

Incredible.

Those tinies are very lucky.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2021 2:54 AM Title: EPILOGUE

A very pleasant story, with a nice twist for an ending.

I always ponder the question:  "If shrunken down and at the every whim of a beautiful Goddess, would I ever want to be returned back to my old life?"

Your story addresses that question, and I'm pretty certain most of us here reading and writing this stories always ask that same question {well not if the Goddess ends up being a jerk of a devil instead; but that's not your story}.

Very well written with good grammar, nice story flow, well but not overly detailed {e.g. Alice's bedroom music posters}, and entertaining story line.  BRAVO!

Looking forward to more of your work.

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