Daron’s empathy is captivating – the way he worries if Liz and Vicky ara alive (even though their deaths would mean all this problem is solved) is an example of the good writing - of show, don’t tell.

Liz and Vicky believe their situation to be like a camp trip and that king Constantine will help. As for Daron, he seems to see them as children, giantesses yes, but not as woman.

What I mean by that is right now the stakes aren’t high. But we see the begining of changes when Daron can’t help remember Liz feet when in bed with his wife... I reckon Daron also like big feet... another good point of his character 😉

So he is bounding with the girls... what about Liz and Vicky? How will each like the visit to Daron’s house and Family? Maybe seeing how Daron and his wife care for each other and their childrens will bring up a warmth they both laked in their previous life (but in different ways), maybe some will be impressed or jealous of his family, of his wife, of
his life.

All that in the most juvenile and clumsy way, as if they were still at home,  because I fell both have yet to realise the consequences of a simple grip or a single step the wrong way. Maybe Liz will end up destroing Daron’s home, his family will have to move to a friends house while he stays behind to rebuild the place... with Liz and Vicky.

I think three lives are about to change, the problem is how.

Thanks for the kind reply to my last comment. And thanks for
sharing your writing. I will be eagerly waiting the next developments.