[Report This]Date: December 18 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Daron appears to be a normal man turned hero by circunstances against all odds. It’s classic and I like it. Liz and Vicky are also normal girls dropped in a larger than life adventure and seem to be good at heart... but I guess we are talking about them in a “normal” life daily basis, which doesn't involve every step you take causing earthquakes.
The giantesses will have to be feed, they will have to shower and will have other needs and desires, after all we are talking about two modern girls transported to a medieval setting. Metting their standards as well as the standards of the king and it’s ludicrous and scared subjects, that all will be Daron’s responsibility – his challenge as the hero.
Allright. But what about the heroines? That will depend on how well they manage, not only do adapt, but to understand their position and the position they put Daron in relation to his life before them.
We already had glimpses of how much the two girls are unaware of the destruction and fear they cause, even with their voices alone. While not evil now, both are clearly self-centered and we still have to see more about how each react to the new situation to have a more clear Picture. What I can say for now is that they spell danger and gigantic shenanigans for Daron.
I think especially Liz will need Daron’s help to do and learn things, both because of her privilleged upbring and because Vicky seems to be too independent... This could mean Daron will have an easier time dealing with Vicky while Liz might feel envy and alienation.
All in all, the writing so far feels natural, the main characters are stablished... and two of them are barefeet giantesses taller than trees. What more could I ask for except for more chapters?
Thank you both, ReclaimerChief17 and Kickyou, for sharing your writing. I will eagerly await the next chapters. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much for the comment! THIS is what I wanted to see 🥺 Glad to see people like you are enjoying our work. You only inspire us to write more! Yes the idea of two normal sized girls being transported into a tiny and more primitive world only opens the door for so many opportunities and communication dynamics. And I hope people are noticing the differences between Liz and Vicky Bc different giantesses and viewpoints allow for a more complex story. I hope to hear more from ya soon :) thanks again for the comment!