[Report This]Date: September 26 2022 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is the story abandoned
Date: May 10 2022 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like an amazing story, hope you continue
Date: May 10 2022 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like an amazing story, hope you continue
Date: December 11 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Minor comment:
Don't bother rewriting, but these 'Lilliputians', so to speak, would not be almost inaudible to these girls. Small organisms like mice can definitely make loud noises. I felt you should know for any other works that you may write.
Date: December 11 2021 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, things really seem to be ramping up. Glad the girls didn't just start stomping immediately. It'll be interesting to see how the kingdom reacts to them, and what the girls plan on doing next.
Date: December 04 2021 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice setup! I am expecting lots of action these next few chapters with Liz and Vicky. I am wondering what Daron’s value to the story is. You seem to talk a lot about him, but I guess I’ll just have to stay tuned to find out.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2021 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks promising and is definitely a welcomed sight to see on this site. Guess they are skipping along on the Gulliver-a type of start with no bondage, all limbs are free and ready for action.
With two of them this will also help the dynamics among their encounters.
I hope the two of you can make magic with the two of these lasses.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! Reviews always help motivate us to keep going :)