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Reviewer: Tehleris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice start!


Just noticed one thing; the gender tags are set to m/m - I assume it is meant to be M/f? ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind responds.

Noticing the tag mistake, I fixed it.

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2021 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really like this story so far, nice work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I reposed a much more polished version yesterday. And it includes some embellishments .

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