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Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3: Attacking the Blefuscan Armada

Another fantastic story Sam can't wait to see where this goes from here.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SuperKirby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2021 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3: Attacking the Blefuscan Armada

A very cute story! I enjoyed the gentle interactions between Galatcha and the comparatively-tiny Iota. The part where Galatcha swallowed an army of tiny archers is probably my favorite, even though she vomited them up later. My only criticism is the slight shortage of detail in the vore scene - next time she swallows a tiny, you could describe that tiny’s experience in her stomach a bit more, such as her body heat, gastric acids, the lack of light, etc. Other than that, I love the story! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing out the flaws in the story, when I have time I’ll edit chapter three and add more details to the vore scenes.

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