Reviewer: KYS Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2023 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: There's A Maniac Within These Halls

Imagining Maya as a sexy anime villianess with that hair color makes her seductive in my mind.

Can't wait to see what she does next. Hope there's more detail on the experience of her victims inside he belly in future chapters... yum.

Reviewer: Mr Decadent Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: There's A Maniac Within These Halls

holy hell this is amazing. not only is the action excellent, but im also genuinely intrested in learning more about the womens goals and motivations. 

keep up the good work <3

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: There's A Maniac Within These Halls

Great start.  Like how you used gas as a catalyst and it didn't affect everyone the same.  Imagining bodies with some shrunken parts and dying from their body not being able to handle the stress was interesting.  Do wonder though.  Did the gas only affect living tissue or shrink clothing or other materials as well?  Will the keys be too tiny for the lock?  Would be slightly funny unless she had a way to turn them back.

Author's Response:

You're questions was pretty much the things i asked myself after I posted the chapter! XD

Still, I'm certain I can come up with solutions to those missed details. I'm glad you thinks it a great start!

Author's Response:

You're questions was pretty much the things i asked myself after I posted the chapter! XD

Still, I'm certain I can come up with solutions to those missed details. I'm glad you thinks it a great start!