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Reviewer: 123youjizz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2021 4:46 AM Title: Part 2

This is probably one of the best giantess stories I've read.  I love the interaction and desire from our female leads.  Also the description and vividness are amazing!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2021 11:28 AM Title: Part 2

Phenomenal part 2. Absolutely nailed it. Gonna have to disagree with you though on whether this should stay closed ended. This has such a good opening and realistic characters. You don't need to start from scratch with something similar. Perhaps take a break for awhile then return to this when you feel the drive to write. But I would argue this as the perfect opening since you can pretty much go any direction from here with so many different avenues to explore.



Author's Response:

I wrote this story to be two parts, not because it doesn't have the potential to be continued, but simply because I don't have the time to make it longer. Since the time I conceived and wrote this about five months ago, my life and the amount of free time I have has changed a lot. I'm relatively happy with the open-endedness of it currently; while I would never rule out revisiting these characters, I'm somewhat pleased that this story stands alone as a vignette of a rather extraordinary day.

I really appreciate your comments though, and it's reading praise like yours that makes me want to carve time out of my days to continue writing in the future!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2021 1:27 AM Title: Part 2

Wait, this story is over? The story tags say it's listed as completed. And the ending of this chapter kinda feels like an ending, but I hope that's not the case. 

Well, either way, this is one amazing sexy chapter! I love how aroused she was! The scene with the mirror was nice, and even the comment about keeping him trapped in her crotch while being out in public sounds hot. 

Oh yeah, the finger dripping scene was sexy too. It was great to hear her thoughts too since we didn't see everything. I wanted to also see Kesley's playtime as well since she said that her friend gets horny in a similar fashion. 

Brad is actually living my dream. She makes a good point about how it's his choice if he enjoys it or not. I know I love it, just like her so maybe I could replace him one day. Haha! 

Well, if this story is finished, I would love to see you write more stories like this and I can't wait for it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! I hope you had as much fun reading this as I did writing it.

Brad (and the unnamed narrator) are both pretty much living the dream that most of us in this community have. But I've always felt like most other people would entirely not enjoy being thrust (no pun intended) into a situation like this. Like, of all the people in the world to randomly shrink one day, what are the odds that they would be a macrophile? Probably pretty low. I wanted to specifically write to this idea.

And yeah, as you may have seen in my other comments, I always planned for this story to only be two parts. The rest of 2021 is very hectic for me, but who knows, maybe I'll write more and share it here in the future!

 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2021 9:14 PM Title: Part 2

Great one, Q-writer!

Looking forward to the next chapter...

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