[Report This]Date: July 31 2021 9:29 AM Title: Part 1
Whoa! This story is amazing, and the sexual stuff hasn't even happened yet!
The part that got me into this story were these 2 women. They feel....real. Many stories have stereotypical giantesses and that's fine for me. However, the writing in this chapter is insanely good. To see them figure out what's going on and consider each possibility was fun to watch.
It's also so rewarding to see them gradually choose to keep as a pet rather than immediately once they saw him. That way, she won't have these doubts later on and these women will be confident in toying with Brad.
Also, the man trying to escape in the beginning was good, too. It shows how desperate he is to leave and I love how it pressured the ladies into trapping him.
Also, nice work with the story description. That alone was enough to make me click on this story. It's a great, fun idea to write about and I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 31 2021 1:59 AM Title: Part 1
This is way more up my alley. Nothing against mirror, can't even begin to imagine the amt of work that took. But for me it's all about the simpler stories. This knocks it out of the park in that regard. Cheers and fingers crossed you decide to expand beyond two parts.
Author's Response:
No offense taken about Mirror, in a lot of ways this kind of shorter story is more my cup of tea too. I certainly won't ever write another Mirror-length story, it was fun but the amount of time it took was exhausting. While I don't see myself expanding this story past two parts, maybe if I get the time in the next year or so I might write a medium-length story with a similar plot to this one.
Date: July 30 2021 3:22 PM Title: Part 1
Really well done so far! I could definitely see these girls acting realistically.