[Report This]Date: January 11 2022 2:07 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Loved binging this! Hope you continue this series at some point in the future. I love the characters, the teasing relationship, and the tension of steamier moments. Great job!
Author's Response:
Binge again my friend, chapter five is here! I hope you like where this story goes!
Date: August 10 2021 6:16 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Just finished re-reading and I still believe this is one of the best written stories on this site. I'm still looking forward to the next chaprer and hope that you have not given up on it.
Author's Response:
Well, re-read again my friend! For there is a new chapter! I hope you enjoy it!
Date: April 30 2021 7:17 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
This story is fantastic! Great writing, compelling characters, and interesting world building details. I'm enjoying the budding relationship between these two. Lena's personality is very appealing. I'd probably have a crush on her too if I was in Ryan's situation.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and don't worry, I have a crush on Lena too lol. Hope you enjoy their ever (if slowly) evolving relationship!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 12:11 PM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Amazing chapter with equally good pacing. I'm glad it picked up a bit in the end though. It reads as a bit of a transition chapter for them, in a good way of course, very natural!
Author's Response:
Glad you like the pacing, hope you like Chapter 5!
[Report This]Date: April 27 2021 9:37 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
Another great chapter, an enjoyable read, though I have to say I'm really glad things between them are starting to pick up pace, towards the end at least. I'm not sure how many more awkward looks and embarassed glances I could take!
Also appreciate the grumbly-stomach forshadowing...
Author's Response:
The awkward idiots continue their romp, grumbly tummy and all!
Date: April 27 2021 9:25 AM Title: CH4. All Work, No Play
WOW !!!
Amazing story.
Such gems are very rarely seen here.
Please continue this story. I am curious what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the review, wanted to wait till I updated before responding.
Sorry for the wait!