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Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2021 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I really enjoyed the chapters.
I like the description of what heroism feels like.(I really like how you describe the details).

Luckily, the cervix wasn't hungry and ate it (And he didn't end up in her womb.) :)
Please continue .

I'm sorry, my English is bad. :(



Author's Response:

Not into womb thingies either (as I said in another review), sorry! but I will continue, that's for sure. Thank you for your review

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2021 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Interesting start. Please continue.



Author's Response:

Will do for sure! Just give me time as I work full time and this may take some weeks to finish. 

I also like positive criticism: any orthographic mistake, any way to express things better, just tell me so I improve me & the story!

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