Reviewer: Pdawgg22 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2021 8:35 AM Title: Time for Change

I loved the original story. Particularly the way it ended, that Evie became so submissive and loved her new life. 

 

I don't really understand the new summer story. It's back when Eva tries to escape. We know this doesn't happen so I'm curious as to why you chose that timeline? 

Author's Response:

I would simply say don't fret too much about it haha. There's a lot of ambiguous time skips in the story, so best to think of it as fitting somewhere in there. Or if you prefer it could be totally standalone. I'm glad you like the story though!

Reviewer: 0neGenericWord Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2021 2:03 AM Title: Time for Change

Wow there's, a lot of reviews already. Lot's been said, some good, some bad, so I won't bother recapping anything.

What I will say is that this is the sort of story that probably only could have been told as size smut, which is a weird thing to say about anything. The way it goes full on with this weird winding fucked up almost romance feels kinda like a slightly more fetishistic genderswapped Killing Stalking, where the characters are well written specifically to highlight the fucked ness, where the parts that are sweet and hot almost feel put there to specifically reflect the parts that are just Eve losing her fucking mind to stockholme syndrome. 

The latest chapter (29) is like, almost the peak of this. The constant swing between Tina the meek office lady and Tina the megalomaniac nightmare feels like you're on a boat in the middle of a hurricane, and the way Eve slowly loses the ability to tell the difference between the two is as fucked as it is hot. Is it a fucked up dynamic that happens to be hot or is it a hot dynamic that happens to be fucked up? It's not entirely clear, but I think the great thing about kink spaces is that you can kinda explore that without the usual need to wonder about morality and decency. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2021 9:42 PM Title: Time for Change

I do not question Eva's breakdown. It is your sudden descision to make this al to easy and this advantage out of nowhere with zero consequences for the parties carrying this out is absurd. Never tested it on other humans before of shrinking to atomic size is safe, but somehow everything works out.
Just fire at the floor and only Eva grows, nothing else. With this sudden deus ex machina its to easy. Its so overkill in advantage and feels cheap/unearned.

Its like paralyzing someone after enough other torture leave them on the floor and than say after a few days when returning. 
“Wow, you couldn’t even cross one floor tile huh?”

That is what I mean, that she acts like Eva was just put in the naughty corner. Where does that false pride come from?

What would happen if I put someone in total isolation for a few days? Wow, what effort, what skill. This is acuired to easy with zero consequences. Now all of a sudden everything fall into place and Tina gets the exact behavior she wants.

 

Author's Response:

I mean, solitary confinement is literally a torture technique used to break people. Also it has been specified a number of times that the prototype only affects organic matter. It's extreme because that is the point. It is meant to be extreme. And as the previous chapter demonstrated, Tina is anything but confident about any of it. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 5:51 PM Title: Time for Change

I could raise you that if you are small enough, not even those forces could do anything to Eva. At a certain point those forces are happening 'above you' in a sense. It is indeed an interesting development however. 

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It could. But in no way should people, with any device what soever find Eva in there. Including Amy or Tina. Now that she is subatomic.
This is something Eva must resolve herself.

I agree Panzer, I don't think Tina thought this through and I'm not sure Amy doesn't care at all. It must hit it some point. These are indeed actions you would do to someone who killed your whole family/serial killer.
Keeping someone locked up in a cellar with out the torture or raping is already extreme.
It is interesting that Tina finds some steps extreme to do, but subatomic level shrinking is extreme torture.

Interesting to see where the writer is going with this. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2021 6:14 AM Title: Time for Change

By the way. I also wrote a story were I try to put much detail in every chapter.
"The Mysterious Island", see the link below.
https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6816

 

Reviewer: 0neGenericWord Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2021 10:44 PM Title: Time for Change

It is, unbelievably funny that at the end of the day Eva's less upset about what Tina's doing and more upset that she's on the receiving end of things. Its not quiiiite just deseets because Tina's clearly on the verge of some mental breaking point, but it definitely keeps Eva from ever getting too sympathetic. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2021 4:38 PM Title: Time for Change

Very nicely written so far with all those details.

 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2021 7:41 PM Title: Time for Change

I'm intrigued. It has all the giantess executive tropes I like, it sounds like it'll be a really good story, and the fact that it's mostly written already means that it's not going to be abandoned halfway through. Keep it coming.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy to hear that.

It's actually all written believe it or not. There are a few chapter ideas I may add onto it, but it's basically done. Just about...I'd say 60% edited at the moment. 

Reviewer: SirFarty Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2021 4:26 PM Title: Time for Change

I like where this is going