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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

"Jill leaned down to kiss him, and stuck out her
tongue. She began to lick his naked body up and down, and eventually
sucked him into her mouth."
Thanks for your kind review of my story. This (above by you) is as sexy as it gets for me.

Reviewer: amanda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2009 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

mm what a delightfull tale i must agree with the others you have captured all that is a woman in your text,please continue to write its nice to read something memorable.

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2009 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad to see that in the new version you fixed the continuity error (already ate dinner/ candle lit dinner). I've reread this story so many times. I hope you continue to write.

Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2008 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mar-ve-llous !!!!

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2008 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jill must become a series, it was a very excellent job.

Author's Response: Your wish is my command? How do you like the new series?

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