[Report This]Date: January 16 2021 9:44 AM Title: I Don't Belong Here
While not the most exciting chapter, we did learn a lot about this prison.
It's interesting to learn about the different sections with different sizes. So for these tiny guys, their cells may be a safe area, but the common areas are very risky. They could hide in their cells, but eventually they gotta eat.
Glad to see you don't use the stereotypical cell mate that is always someone rude. You make a good point about movies using that trope way too often.
I really like how Sebastian explained how many tiny guys experience the same fate as Jack. It really expands my mind and shows how messed up this system is. (Not that I'm complaining lol).
Looking forward to see what's next! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, the system is very very messed up. Your reviews are actually inspiring me to incorporate Jack's story into the bigger narrative that I am thinking of, so thank you. First, I will have to get Matt involved