[Report This]Date: March 18 2014 10:44 PM Title: Amazon Cousin (rewrite by newmark42)
So hot you forget it is technically incest.
Author's Response:
In the story we find out that Zach has no blood relation to his "cousin".
[Report This]Date: January 01 2012 10:53 PM Title: Amazon Cousin (rewrite by newmark42)
Super hot... A sequel would nice.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2011 3:01 PM Title: Amazon Cousin (rewrite by newmark42)
Once again, I forget to rate.
Date: June 01 2011 3:01 PM Title: Amazon Cousin (rewrite by newmark42)
I have been on this site for about six months now, and I can't believe I haven't read this before! The story is excellent, filled with lots of tantalizing scenes, which I love.
Date: June 18 2010 1:30 AM Title: Amazon Cousin (rewrite by newmark42)
This is my first review, and I'm using it more as just a comment box.
You mentioned in your Bio that you hoped for feedback, Newmark, so I'm going to try to give you some If you want more depth, feel free to contact me back.
I liked this story a LOT. I'm a big fan of the original, and Chelgi's work in general. Your story has a very different take and feel, but I think that's great. It was a really good example of a kind/gentle story that is still strongly erotic. I loved the feel you created of her still being dominant in the situations, but wanting to use that power to please. That's all I can think of for now, I hope you keep writing :-)