Still really enjoying the story!

Glad you're keeping on expanding the story. Really like the constant kind of back and forth torment that David's in. The description of being either on her hand or in her shoes is just great! Also, love the constant shift between aware and regretful, and unaware and oblivious.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great start so far! Love the hesitant/reluctant giant angle.

Curious if this story was inspired by my work over on coiledfist:

https://www.coiledfist.org/article.php?story=tiny_guy_crazybigasians01 

Great stuff as always, good sir! You're one of the best when describing feet-based interactions on a raw, sensually intimate level. Perfectly descriptive! 

What you do great in all your writing, you did well here too. 

However, I do have a major critique of the story. The fact that Diane is Cody's gf's mom seemed rather incidental to the story. Neither Cody nor Diane ever once even acknowledged the fact that she's stealing him away from her daughter, or ask "but what will (gf) think?" (Just realized that gf is so much of an afterthought that she isn't even named.) 

The summary of this story on your page, with how you described the premise, made me hopeful, but I was ultimately disappointed by the contents. Diane may as well have been any attractive older woman with whom Cody's acquainted for any other reason. 

Personally, I think that incorporating this would have made the story that much more exciting. I personally love the mother-in-law fantasy within this fetish, and I'm sad that there's such a lack of it. The tension of being separated from the woman you love by her own mother keeping you all for herself is so tantalizing and should definitely be explored more. From your other stories, I know that this sort of taboo tension is definitely something that you could have narrated expertly. 

I sincerely hope that this critique doesn't offend you, as I have been a great admirer of your writing for years. I just think that with this particular story, the potential teased in the premise was not realized as I know you could have realized it. (I also fully acknowledge that the shortcomings I've described here could be because this story was a commission.) 

Keep up the great work! I always look forward to more from you! :) 

P.S. Please do consider more playful mother-in-law content in the future! ;) 

I could even commission you if you're interested. 

Am I wrong for thinking "lucky John"?  What ever happens to John, I'm sure he both deserves it and it will be most enjoyable, from a freakish fetish point of view that is.

Can't wait to read about the three so called punishments and who will be Angelina's puppet board member.

Terrific story, please keep posting.

Interesting! Love the start!

Damn Ariel, I was all with up until you murdering your own sibling (fratricide).... and his friend in a girl's foot sweat. Lol! Thought she was supposed to be teaching them a life lesson not to look down on others. Not send them a Helldom. 

Love the story, tho. Keep it up. 

Really enjoyed this! Pity she didn't go on a cosmic sexcapade, but a wonderful read all the same dude.

A banger, as always. Love the transformation aspect on top of everything else, what a delicious conceit you've concocted this time! For my money, nobody writes feet as well as you do either, and you are managing to get so many different shades of it here too! "With bated breath," as they say.

I’m enjoying the pseudo-unaware situation a lot. Looking forward to reading more.

Owwhhh, I L-O-V-E-D that one! You wrote about unwilling vore in a so wholesome way that the ending with the unwilling guy becoming willing was totally expected and, still, incredible!

It was a very nice story to read after a so cruel story I read today that made me sad. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for this warm, loving story!