[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 1:35 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
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Date: April 13 2017 11:30 PM Title: Class of Giantess
To everyone that's leaving suggestions on this story: The author passed away. So, sadly, this story is discontinued.
[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 12:08 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
What en ending, I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2017 9:50 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
This is really great! You do a really good job of making the larger characters feel really in control and powerful. The part with Rick getting sucked into Lily's mouth is a really good example of that.
Going by the chapters here so far and your profile description, I think we have pretty similar tastes, so I'll definitely be following this!
Date: January 12 2017 12:51 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Another great short. Further hammers in the fact that Jen is essentially the school's resident psychopath.
As for which Professor to write about next, I fairly partial to Professor Chase but on the other hand i'd like to see what someone does with Professor Masters since I havent actually seen anyone do anything with her yet.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 1:40 AM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Sorry I forgot to rate! No problem! & thank you, I do have a story I've recently started on this site, however, I find it hard to enjoy my own writing when reading it rather than others. It removes the unknown that your story holds as I already know what'll happen in mine.
Date: January 08 2017 5:08 AM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Very interesting story! Has me on the ropes at times with what is going to happen to some characters, poor school commitment leads to shrinking with the potential for a death sentence by a teacher or any student if they choose to do so? Quite scary, one of the hardest things to do is create fear within writing, it's hard to visualise. Yet using an inspired theme, you've managed to show the kinds of dread characters experience and fear some characters can inspire much like the girl in the most recent chapter! well writen! i envy your skills!
Author's Response: Oh gosh that means a lot to me ;U; thank you so much! You could do it too with a little effort, I think. I'm barely a writer, I just read a lot of good ones!
Date: January 08 2017 12:09 AM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Oooh. Very, very nice, Madame Sugarfrost. I almost want you to just discuss things with me via email, because I'm sure that I could help make wonderful chapters centered around little miss Lo.
As for which professor is featured . . . I want someone to feature Professor Chase's love of puns for once. Like, not reacting at all to one of her puns is grounds for losing points, and making some of your own is worth grade points, but for some reason nobody has gone over that.
Author's Response: Madame Sugarfrost hahaha, I'm not that grand, I'm not old enough to be classified that, especially from someone as lovely as you, I look up to you ^^. Lily, or any similar nickname as humiliating or respectful as you like, will do! I've PM'd you my email, I'd love to work closer with you~ I've been hesitant to touch all professor other than my favourite (Inaban), but I'll do my best to bring professor Chase's pun-ishment to life!
Date: January 07 2017 8:29 PM Title: Class of Giantess
Great story. Been reading it, just haven't really left any reviews. I like how everything is loosely interconnected.
I'll give you a bit about me if you'd like to put me in sometime. I'm not really clear on how you want the class schedule done, so I'll leave that blank. You can schedule me however you like to if you put me in, so if you have specific needs you can use mine to fill things out.
Name: Cameron Stone
Male
Height: 5'6"
Bio: Cameron is a very short and scrawny nerdy kid, who also happens to be very timid and submissive, especially around girls. While shy, he is very nice, generous to a fault, the type of person who would give someone the shirt off his back, or give his own meal to someone who didn't have one. Or even take a punishment to spare someone else oNE. Not the type of person to really argue with anyone.
For studies he is a below average student in pretty much every class he has. This isn't for lack of trying, he always puts top effort in, he just has a problem getting a grasp of things, and this leads to him not having any passing grades, and being small a lot, yet teachers tend to be softer on him because of how hard he tries. Other students aren't so nice, as he is what's effectively referred to as a "bully magnet". If taken advantage of he will generally go along and do whatever he is commanded to do, as he lacks the courage or conviction to stand up for himself.
My personal out of character likes: soft vore, anal insertion, foot worship, kept as slave
Dislikes: hard core, crush.
However for purposes of the story I would be up for anything even if it's in my dislikes. Consider me a utility player you can plug in wherever and however needed.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 8:56 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Jon Striker also approves :)
Date: January 04 2017 7:54 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
I love it! A huge thank you for bringing Jeremy into the story. He didn't at all out of character and the fact that Lily has ultierior motives for keeping friendly with him gives a great devious twist to her character.
Lily's actions were creative too. I don't think I know too many macro stories where someone drowns before being swallowed or snuffed by an armpit. Leaves me wondering what'll come of Jeremy if his number comes up.
Great work overall, there were a few typos here and there. Not quite so sure what the pun was supposed to be at the beggining of the story.
Also, Jeremy's going to get a bit of revenge on Michelle in a future update of my shorts. I'll do my best to try to keep her in character.
Oh yeah, and happy New Year!
Author's Response: That sounds fun! And not problem about Jeremy. Lily's creative, but she isn't afraid of doing something more clichéd. Apologies for my typos, I type these out in the middle of tr night when I'm hiding myself and a little horny. Asian family, gotta hide ;; Keep in mind, Lily might not always succeed, but she'd do anything for Michelle. Especially getting revenge of her own for Michelle, and could certainly try to fight off Jeremy. Pun was the "cum" part ;) she's a dirty one ~ happy new year too!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 12:32 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
Well written with such realistic dialogue from the characters. Keep up the good work. ;)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2016 7:55 PM Title: Class of Giantess
Man that was one of the most immersive reads I've had on this site bravo. hope you have a great christmas!
[Report This]Date: December 11 2016 1:49 AM Title: Class of Giantess
Pretty good last chapter! As for the whole hubbub concerning the other chapters, I say that if you find yourself in a rut with this setting, really try to push yourself. Who knows, maybe go for a chapter arc focussing in on a plot, or maybe go for a genre inside CoG, like a mystery or an adventure. I don't know. Keep up with the goods.
Date: December 10 2016 7:22 AM Title: Class of GIantess: George Lutz
Not bad, not bad. I agree with WrittenVoreArt, more details would have been lovely. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you. The big problem with the details is, that I write it in a different kind of document, and it makes the font and paragraphs look larger, so I feel like I'm done dinner than I am.
Date: December 10 2016 7:17 AM Title: Class of Giantess Shorts: Gina Evans
The subsequent chapters have been much better in terms of writing ability and pacing. I very much enjoyed your writing of Jen, her power, sadism, and general cruelty was very entertaining to witness. Poor Gina goes through a lot!
Author's Response:
It's good to hear that the pacing and overall writing has improved. I hoped people would like how Jen was depicted, and it seems like that is the case. As for Gina, she ma go through a lot, but she can dish it out as well. Nevertheless, many thanks for your review. It is appreciated.
Date: December 10 2016 7:02 AM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
That was really, truly, very good. Your descriptors and conveyance of imagery is spot-on. I liked your use of tildes to convey the upward inflection in Michelle's voice. Do you mind if I make use of your characters in my own CoG works? Lily herself is of particular interest to me because one of my stories is told from Dr. Northend's perspective.
Author's Response: I can't believe I missed this review. Please! By all means use my characters, I'd like nothing more than for you all to use my characters, especially Lily! I'm super happy you like my writing? And I hope you enjoy it more from now on!
Date: November 27 2016 10:43 PM Title: Class of GIantess: George Lutz
Though the three part format is interesting I feel that each part should get a bit longer and hopefully more detailed. I honestly laughed at the whole Travis bit. I noticed a spelling mistake or two, but other than that, I thought the whole story was alright.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'll try and take this to heart and work more on the length.
Date: November 26 2016 7:58 PM Title: Class of Giantess: Lil' troubles
What a great short read, I really like the depiction of the characters involved.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2016 7:15 PM Title: Class of Giantess Shorts: Gina Evans
I'd say that this one is even better than the last one. Very solid writing here. I spotted a few tense and syntax errors that you might want to skim through but otherwise this is a fantastic short.
I especially liked the introduction of sweatplay. It isn't really something you see done very well in stories but I think you pulled it off. It's also nice to see you took inspiration form the character bios to create the scenario (Jen's love of her sweaty body and eating her classmates alive, I guess she doesn't mind the taste of her own sweat lol).
It's interesting how Gina can go from seemingly friendly and ordinary to cruel to quivering victim. I'm surprised that this is only the second time we've seen Jen in a story. If there's someone to turn a usual dominant into a frightened bug she's the one to do it.
Once again, great work!
Author's Response:
Many thanks, I was hoping that it would be better than the last one. I need to go back and edit a few things. Also, as for integrating stuff from the bios, that's generally what I end up doing for things. As for Jen being used more, I am also a little surprised she hasn't been used more, since she's most certainly the most cruel of the bunch. Once more, many thanks for the review and the five stars.