[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 1:46 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Re-Reading this story (and series) for the....I can't recall how many times. And I feel I need to leave a comment specifically here.
And I have to say I do hope you come back to it/finish this saga one day in the future.
It's just so freaking good.
I love the gradual but powerful development of the characters and the situation Scott is in just keeps devolving for him.
I have to say, loving the scenarios where he's with the middle aged women (especially their wine addled adventures XD)
But Sylvia has me intrigued, another older woman. But one who's use of Scott isn't as bad, or the very least, she's not actively making it as bad as some of the others.
She's one of the few ' lighter' characters in terms of their treatment of Scott.
But this chapter I keep coming back to as it has me hooked, what is Syliva's plans, what can she do to Judy, what can Scott do if he decides to spill the beans.
I know Judy seems to be on a power trip and is dreaming high.
But could Sylvia be a way out for him...a way out from the torment, of the seemingly never ending (kinky XD) but forced subjegation at the hands of Nancy, or his mother's seemingly aloof nature. (and her own subjegation of him, albeit less erotic in intent)
Sylvia has me intrigued, and I love it. And I enjoy reading her character and her interaction with Scott.
Your writing is always a treat, and a gift, your description, your characters, your erotically charged segments, intercut with the worldbuilding, all make for a wonderful read.
And I do hope you come back to this series in future. I feel it needs a nice cap off. (and Justice for Scott XD I may not get it, but I can dream)....and for some reason, I keep picturing Judy and Nancy under Sylvia's feet.
Date: August 26 2022 12:16 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
What is Sylvia's age? Or hight, or foot size.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 11:33 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Hope this gets continued eventually.
Date: February 25 2021 10:02 PM Title: Time-Out 3: Son of the Year
Time out 3 chapter 4 - i love it
Date: April 28 2020 6:09 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Do you think you'll ever continue this series?
Date: November 22 2019 11:57 AM Title: Time-Out 6: Power Play
Wow, did Maggie enjoy abusing his member like this? Does she intend to go further that way in?
Date: November 03 2019 7:49 AM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Ok so Judy enjoys abusing Scott in a sexual way? Why doesn't she ever talk about it? Or even Scott? Would be nice to see more of tis stuff between the two
Author's Response:
The series is largely told in Scott's perspective, so some of those questions are intentionally meant to be left ambiguous. Thanks for reading
Date: June 19 2019 1:42 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Not a chance to see this ended? Maybe with little twist in Scott mind as he slowly discovers he secretly like his sister domain (and of course her feet)
Author's Response:
Yeah, this story has been sort of an unfortunate casualty as my focus in the macro-writing community has shifted the last couple years. I wouldn't call it dead, as I still have it mapped out, but I can't promise any definite plans to continue.
Date: October 20 2018 12:08 PM Title: Time-Out 4: Boot Camp
ps. Upon seeing your note in the last chapter end note, I now rescind my earlier statements about people telling what stories to work on lol
Author's Response:
I forgot that was there, too, since this story is one of my older ones.
Date: October 20 2018 11:56 AM Title: Time-Out 4: Boot Camp
I'm a textbook lurker on this site. I've been haunting GW for a decade or so and have only ever reviewed/commented on a couple of stories. And I'm still yet to submit any of my own work.
That being said, if I were a regular reviewer, I would have written the equivalent of a novel's worth of praise for your many, many contributions to this community. Better late than never, right?
I won't get into too many specifics, but this chapter in particular stands out to me. I get the contrast that you're talking about between this and your Blackmail series, because this scene with Maggie and Scott both at normal size is very reminiscent of the scene in Blackmail 2, I think it was, when Carly wanted Jack to smell her feet after mowing the lawn. Both similar scenes in that it is younger sister/older brother and that both characters are still normal sized - which is a standout exception if you ask me. Personally, I enjoy a piece of well-written foot-smelling/stench torture whether it is microphilic based or not. But it's really rare to find on this site in particular - and you, sir, do it spectacularly.
Two more things and I'll cease my prattling.
A)I don't think your use of a "younger" giantess has ever been distasteful. You may push the boundary and flirt with the line...but good literature should be able to do that. Anyone who says otherwise should shutup and read Lolita and then try and argue the point with Ol' Vlad.
Any times where the relationship between your characters has bordered into the actually sexual(insertion/masturbation etc) have not, from memory, been at a time when the giantess is younger. It wasn't until Blackmail 3 that Carly started getting Jack off purposefully. I have always found your younger giantess interactions to be appropriately tasteful. (Anyone who wants to argue about that can go and check out some of the dirty, smutty filth that you can find on writing.com in the interactives).
B)What the actual hell is wrong with some of these past comments??!! It seems like half of them are just people telling you to get on with some other series like Toy Teacher or Julia(which, if I'm being honest, are two of your stories that I have had the least time for). I mean, the audacity of these comments is galling beyond belief. Especially that one guy whose entire review was "Toy teacher." Just can't believe how rude some people are.
And now my rant is ended.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the review. Same-size interludes in macro stories are often some of my favorite variations on the theme, where the psychology and power dynamic remain despite people being the same height, but you don't see too many of those around, so I incorporate them when they make sense, like here.
I personally can't be the judge of my own story and whether it keeps good taste or not, but I hope people don't take offense to this one, and glad you didn't. There are probably elements of stories like this one and Blackmail that I would write differently if done today; many of these characters/stories were conceived when I myself was closer in age to the players. That may not make a difference to some readers, but it is what it is. The overall tone is sexualized and taboo-pushing, like many works of literature or film, but there are bounds I observe, like you said.
Date: September 10 2018 9:09 PM Title: Time-Out 4: Boot Camp
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Date: February 11 2018 5:16 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Having Ella placing her foot in was Awesome. Her toes crushing his genitalia and everything else. Your description was fabulous. He knew the incredible difference between Mrs. Stevens toes and Ella's. Their relationship will never be the same.
Author's Response:
Always nice to get reviews on older stories. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: February 11 2018 4:59 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Loved your description as her foot leaves the shoe. The initial burst and then it leaves. The description of what it's like to be battling her big toe for an hour. It made me feel like I was there. The long shower to try to get the smell out. An awesome idea. I would think the smell would be all up inside you. I don't think a shower would wash it away. Really loving this.
Date: February 11 2018 2:52 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Such a cool chapter.
Date: February 11 2018 2:44 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Love how slowly and calmly she places him in her shoe. You describe the inside of her shoe very well. He climbs but with a simple tilt, in he goes. This is fantastic.
Date: February 11 2018 2:31 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Love Judy,Mrs. Stevens. She's so calm. She's going to punish him for his own good. Love how she picks him up and holds him. Love his fear.
Date: February 11 2018 2:24 AM Title: Mommy's Time-Out
Very cool. This looks great.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 3:48 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
So good! Olivia is a great addition to the cast of characters; one of my favs
Thanks!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: November 17 2017 3:33 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
Awesome writing! All the chapters at the R&R center have been incredible. I love seeing how Judy's master plan is incorporated into the universe you are constructing. Top notch
Author's Response:
Glad to hear. I'm trying more and more to integrate these stories with the background world stuff, wherever logical
[Report This]Date: November 15 2017 10:56 PM Title: Time-Out 7: Sins of the Mother
It is great to see Maggie being Maggie again for a bit!
Author's Response:
I suspect this is the reaction of my readers but probably not anyone in the story besides Maggie