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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2022 2:17 PM Title: WHATEVER HAPPENED TO BUCK FOGARTY?

*Pomaks:  an Islamic ethnic minority native to Bulgaria.

KSD: Bulgaria's Cold War counterpart to the KGB.

GRU: Soviet Red Army Intelligence.

Volkspolizei:  the civil law-enforcing police of of the former East Germany (as opposed to the Cold War-era secret police or Stasi).

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2020 7:13 AM Title: "LITTLE" KNOWN SECRETS

* "And I am very disappointed with you."

Reviewer: kaitlynkristy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2019 6:17 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Thank you for sharing



Author's Response: You're most welcome. :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2019 6:32 AM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

Timescribe said:

"Martial arts, spy tactics, shrinking sci-fi, [and] a moral purpose. This story had everything."

Author's Response: Thank you. You've been a loyal reviewer. Although, I won't be quitting this site, cold turkey. I intend to finish reading and reviewing comparatively more tasteful works in progress like PROPERTY OF OMEGA PI (where the shrunken protagonists are, at least, _over_ sixteen years-old). After that, however, my patronage here is ancient history.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:43 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

An insider replaced by a mole. That took me by surprise. I think this company will be having diminishing returns.



Author's Response: LOL! In more ways than one.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:39 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

I guess he won't be doing any more PLUGS to promote that story.



Author's Response: True! :-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:35 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

One more sick child pornographer bites the dust. But the memory lingeries on.



Author's Response: Your best one, yet! :-D

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:33 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

And so those who praise the content meet the same fate as the writer.

 



Author's Response: Poetic justice! Wouldn't you agree?

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:31 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

I guess she really made him the butt of all  jokes.



Author's Response: Good one! :-)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 5:29 PM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

Well here goes one more round of me making puns in reviews of your tales, for old times sake:

A well written chapter, without any anagrammatical errors.

 



Author's Response: Gracias!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 2:31 AM Title: THE HUNTER BECOMES THE HUNTED

Having just read this story and the epilogue I can't say I blame you for leaving. I will miss your stories.



Author's Response: Thanks. You, Timescribe, and Sir Pixis were my three most supportive reviewers. Rest assured, I'll keep reviewing _your_ stories! But, as far as posting any new stories, here? Highly unlikely, anytime in the near future.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2017 8:51 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Volume 1? Just how long is this story?

So they are going to war. will earth prevail or is this a case of the aliens win? Guess I have to stay tunned to find out.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 12:56 PM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Wait a moment. You mean to tell me that these 50 chapters are just volume one of this story?

Anyway, a well written chapter. Wonder who will win the war.



Author's Response: I still haven't decided. Lol! Seriously, though; I'm making this a two-part epic for several reasons. First off, I've many other works in progress I haven't updated in the last three-to-six months. So, I'd like to reserve some of my creative juices for doing just that. Secondly; I also want to use the time off from this story to think up a way to reintroduce the first two protagonists. Namely, Kenneth Gambol and Jason Grant. And that, in turn, will require tying in another character. More specifically; Steven Hughes (the protagonist from a certain prequel)! Last, but not least? The plot similarities of Monday night's SUPERGIRL episode might get me accused of plagiarism (re: the in-story rationalization used by the aliens for enslaving us Earthlings). So, I want to let the lurking public's memory of that dim a little, before I post the first chapter of vol. 2.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2016 3:29 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Illuminating report indeed. It explains a lot. 

Dr. McGee can explain the tech, but can see come up with a way to fight it?



Author's Response: Well, knowledge is power, they say.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2016 3:19 PM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Glad to see this story contiuned. I'm bit surprised they are even brothering with a plausable disinformation campaign. If uncle Sam looses it won't matter in the end.

Anyway I look forward to future installments.



Author's Response: And you will get them! :-) As for the disinformation being pointless? That might be correct in the long run. But, it's difficult to fight a war on two fronts. And a nation-wide panic might complicate this particular one. Because, it's been my experience that the truth DOESN'T ALWAYS set one free. Sometimes, it only gets one in deeper shit! Especially, when it's told to someone who doesn't want to hear it, in the first place.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2016 6:01 PM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

That's one way to raise the roof.

Intresting idea they had about shrinking star ship crew and passangers. 

This story reminds me of the engerizer bunny, it just keeps going and going.



Author's Response: LOL! Consider yourself lucky. The original version (at Pete Smith's original Giantess Planet) wound up being _45_ chapters long! So, this particular ret-con might wind up having to be split up into _two_ volumes (a la CASE OF THE MISSING MENTAL GIANT).

Reviewer: Davis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2016 11:51 PM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

The very good story about dreams. I like broad minded people and good story writers. I am totally agree with you sporting is very important for everyone.

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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 6:15 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Guess that answers the question of where the marticle (sorry can't spell) came from. Glad to see your muse is working.

Looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response: Thanks! As I've apologetically said (many times) before: That's the way my creative juices seem to operate. They either ebb-and-flow like tides. Or the reservoir dries up entirely and takes time to replenish. With the latter usually requiring the start of another work in progress (as frustrating as that might be for my loyal lurkers)!

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 4:56 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

Glad to see this story contiuned. Shrink and grow ningas are a unquie twist. Wonder where the miracle is coming from.



Author's Response: Well, the Heikegani-ryu were first introduced in "LITTLE" KNOWN SECRETS. So, the Am Ja Hwa Rang aren't exactly unique. Unfortunately, for the latter, the former might not be the type to believe in _healthy_ competition. But that--as they say--is a story for another time.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2015 4:15 AM Title: INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE

It has been a long time. Almost forgot about this story. Glad to see Jason rescued from the Baronettes. 

Look forward to the next installment.

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