[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
Missing this. Best story ever written on this site.
Hope you're safe and well WoP :)
[Report This]Date: April 13 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 36
Sorry for taking so long!I forgot to check for a while hahahaha
Okaaaay so you were right in telling me to watch out for Nell. Her having the same desires as Naomi, but hiding them so Anabelle wont dislike her is...interesting, I have to say is a lot more than I gave her credit for, though I still like Naomi more.
And talking about Naomi, things got tense with chef Dufort, poor Camilla and Naomi being incredibly petty. I'm really happy that Anabelle managed to get a win, finally, and save her, at the cost of...giving hell toa child molester??I seriously dont get Anabelle sometimes. If I was her, and had been so horriblu bullied, no one would ever get me to shut up, I would be bringing hellfire to Zoey and all the bullies. But oh well, I guess she has her reasons. And oh my god Zoey keeps getting worse and worse and more abusive, obsessed and deranged. And Naomi is not far behind, though Naomi is better because she would never beat Anabelle.
Im still kinda starving from Naomi content, too much Nell, more Naomi hahahaha enjoyed the chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2023 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 36
I loved Nell here. Specially the foot part.
I loved that as the other giants she also has dark desires for dominance. It is a great twist that she has this side and not only the good girl one.
The way she stomped the insect.with her feet.
The way Annabelle got drawn to Nell's feet power.
The way Nell placed her soles in front of Annabelle, looming over her.
The way Poppy urged her to kiss the soles.
The way she firmly pinned her underfoot against the floor. And then kept her there, forced to endure.
The way she gave excused herself, with obvious lies.
And the way Poppy wanted to surrender herself so Nell would unleash her hidden desires.
I believe that all together made cheer for Nell. Some part of me wants Annabelle to imprint to Nell or at least end under her control.
At the end, the relationship between Nell and Annabelle it is the most different compared to the other girls.
Don't know what you have planned but I hope that we will see more Nell and her feet.
Anyway, great job with this story!
Date: April 05 2023 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 36
(First of all, I don't speak English, and my knowledge of it is low, so if something is wrong, or is not understood, there is the reason)
This is without a doubt one of the stories, not just about giants, that has hooked me the most. So much so that I fear for Annebell, with everything that has happened before and during the story, I genuinely wanted SHE to have a happy ending, or at least a healthy one 😢, but I don't know, the more I read, the more I get the feeling that the writer is going to give us an average ending between good and bad at best (and yes, the bad part at the end would be taken by Ann).
[Report This]Date: April 03 2023 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 36
First and most important: good to know you are feeling better and hope you get fully recovered soon.
About the last two chapters, the ticklig was by far my favorite part! Often an playful act, it’s also a symbol of intimacy. It’s a touch that invade our space, causing a loss of control and at the same time undeniable… pleasure. That’s what I imagine Nell experienced when Anna pulled the splinter out. She liked it and actively searched excuses for more.
Repeating what others already said, Nell and Annabelle interactions are the most wholesome and intriguing. Did Anna enjoy it? She denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert, but I am inclined to believe all this denial is due to her situation – having seen so much suffering and death, having been abused and tortured herself, Anna is uncapable of allowing any sense of pleasure or happiness that is not through Poppy.
Both have problems. Nell can’t stand up to Naomi and be honest about how she fells towards her new friend. And Anna also denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert for something might very well be her own lust at work.
But wasn’t Anna the one first impressed with Nell feet to begin with? Only after that Poppy begun to have ideas of touching and cleaning her sole. At this point neither are being honest with each other. There is also the aditional problem that Nell is regarding her as Poppy like all the others. Why not use her true name?
Because as Poppy she can stay forever with her. Yes, I am a romantic and foolish foot lover, but what can I do? I hope Nell is able to prove and open herself to Anna. The problem is her family, especially Naomi.
Talking about Naomi, how woud the entiltled punk-rock giantess react if Anna ever said she liked Nell feet more? That she found them beautifull and Nell even more beautifull? Would she do it without Poppy’s help and aware Byte might be watching? Acknowledging one simple desires as her own might be the first step to start turning the tables.
There is more… a lot more. For Annabelle’s sake Nell is willing to go far and that might be the entire plan those monsters of a parents have. But I need to think more about all that happened.
Again, thanks for your dedication, even droping a chapter when you are recovering. But please take care of your health first.
Have a good easter and until the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2023 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
The interactions between Nell and Anna are the most wholesome in the story, the dynamic they have really shows against the madness of the rest of the people Anna is forced to interact with any given day. The splinter scene was the most genuinely kind moment Anna has seemingly had since entering the Fearsome Foursome's homes.
Nell leaving her foot on Anna does leave me pause but I do also sort of hope if Anna can't escape this nightmare scenario she ends up with Nell. Poppy is definitely a monkey wrench but the extended foot smother while worrisome for Anna seems like something they could both come to enjoy together in life. Like maybe we've lowkey discovered a lifelong friendship/pairing of two people shit on by life who finally have somebody else to make their own better.
The music scene was also rather touching since it was something FOR Anna to enjoy versus something for Anna for the FOURSOME to enjoy. It also helps Nell learn a new skill that she might be good at and increase her self esteem with Naomi and the others routinely knocking it down whenever they can.
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Byte is fearless like a tiny Batman.
Ready to face danger at the drop of a hat to help the cause of the tinies in this tragic laden world they find themselves in. He definitely cut it a little close with Naomi waking up but his exit skills are to be commended.
I do hope they manage to free Daria and her people though, the more allies they can muster for the cause is surely beneficial to the mission when fighting literal titanic killing machines with no moral compass.
As for the big day I am sure it will be onmious and another moment of terror for poor Anna's memory banks if the Foursome or their families are involved. Whatever it is they have planned for tomorrow hopefully Nell will be there to brighten her mode after the ordeal that is surely to come.
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Well fuck there seems to be a lot to unpack here...
The dinner scene was as gruesome as I was expecting highlighted by Naomi piercing the guys skull Jason Voorhees style with her fork. I do hope Tessa's work does find its way into the world at some point so her death was not in total vain. Something like that could have really saved Anna from this hellish nightmare world.
Naomi getting one over slightly on Anna is kind of expected given their power and ability but sadly used for completely petty reasoning. It was wonderful to see Anna get a win even if took all her resolve and gumption to achieve it. I truly hope the Dufronts are at least allowed to be happy together from now on so her win doesn't get undone by the whims of her captors.
things heat up even more.
Anna really needs a hug right now...
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I think Nell would be the best case scenario for Anna if she is never able to escape the BSA or return to her friends/family. She has been the one bright spot in the bleak existence she's had so far and a calming influence. She also seems to be helping Nell grow as a human being by encouraging her instead of belittling her at every turn.
I think Naomi would be a fiercely protective owner over Anna and likely even out pantshittingly terrifying Leah. Her dedication to keeping Poppy -safe- would definitely eliminate a lot of her dangers in life...and other tinies/people along the way likely.
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Hope you get well soon or are recovering/recovered from your illness.
Date: April 01 2023 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 36
Man you keep teasing us with Camilla 😩 that end was legitimately gonna be my favorite scene of the whole story if Naomi swallowed her (or at least very very high on the list). But, I know story must come first so I don’t blame you lol. Always excited to see new chapters to this story!! Your writing continues to be great
Author's Response:
Lol thanks GhostWriter. Unfortunately, Camilla and her father do get a happy ending (at least they do while in this story--afterwards?--who can say)
Thanks again for reading!
Author's Response:
Lol thanks GhostWriter. Unfortunately, Camilla and her father do get a happy ending (at least they do while in this story--afterwards?--who can say)
Thanks again for reading!
Date: April 01 2023 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened. I am glad your health is getting better.
So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot. Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her. So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.
Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary. She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the daughter in front of the father, damn that cold. Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold. Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on. I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.
Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.
SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do that to students deserve what ever happens. Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.
I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish. But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.
Author's Response:
Hey Ralgar!
Sorry for worrying you! I'm glad you found The Sano's arc interesting. I also agree that Nell is easy to root for (in some scenarios). Also despite what I'm currently writing, I also enjoy the Giant/tiny dynamic you described, and hope to write a story like that.
And yeah, Naomi is something else. I guess you can't be the heir to a billion dollar conglomerate without being perceptive. Lol, and it's true that the she is impulsive and cruel enough to potentially destroy the monetary success of their magazine by eating their figurehead. But I guess love makes you do crazy things.
Hahahaha, Byte (or someone) will reveal all to Annabelle in due time.
And good catch Ralgar about Zoey. Yes, their relationship was complex to say the least (particularly on Zoey's end). It will be delved into more in Chapter 41, so be prepared.
Also thanks for reading and all the well wishes!
Date: March 09 2023 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 35
Also, I would love it if you start writing on Wattpad.
Author's Response: I might expand to other platforms for other stories, but I already have trouble regularly uploading to just this one lol.
Date: March 08 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
Please, try and finish this book. It's amazing. I love it
Author's Response:
I have no plans of dropping it! Sorry for the delay and thank you, Skull!
[Report This]Date: February 26 2023 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 35
I assume you have tonnes on at the moment, hence the lack of update.
Hope it's all positive stuff and life is going well.
Can't wait for next chapter when you do get round to it :)
Author's Response:
I was, thanks for your support though! I appreciate your patience, redfoot!
Date: January 14 2023 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
So first off I hope you had a good new year.
I really liked this chapter it had a couple of surprises. I really liked the Naomi and Poppy scene, it was hot. I also loved to see more Naomi, she is so interesting, I am still trying to get in her head, so I am still looking for ward to her next chapter, and I am really looking forward to seeing The Poppy/Naomi scene, ( though i do have two request since you do ask for them, can u do more with Poppy and being around butts, and could you do a scene with Poppy as a sponge when the girls are showering or bathing, the idea of using tinies as a sponge or rag to clean yourself is hot,( mind this is your story, so if you don't want to I am ok, I like most things you have written in this story, even the stuff I normally don't like.
So you surprised me with Nell, I wasn't expecting for Poppy to be interested in her, but you pulled it off. So this will be an interesting direction to go in, and honestly if she is going to really imprint on anyone short of Cloe, ( yes i am still rooting for Cloe), Nell is probably for the best, ( i do still think Nell isn't the solution, but if she is stuck with the BSA, then Nell would at least take her wants into consideration, and might actually help out other shrunken in time).
So of course this will cause even more fracture between Naomi and Nell, and might even completely destroy that relationship, though mind it probably was headed that way anyway in time. Also I do wonder how it will affect Naomi, if it will cause her to double down or actually take a step back and reconsider her approach to Poppy. At first glance I think it would cause her to double down, but there is a slight chance that it might cause her to take a step back, after all the other girls haven't been any different in there approach, so the others haven't been forced to change, but Nell does act different, and They have scene how Poppy responds to Nell, ( and they know poppy is going through the motions of loyalty). So it does make me wonder, and honestly I would really like to see one of the girls actually change a little at least and maybe become a better person, at least a little, ( honestly I think Molly has the best shot at this, but I am rooting for Naomi a little to. So this is turning out to be even a better arc than I anticipated.
I am interested to see where that think with Lucky Days ( such a wierd saying), and the cherry tomatoes thing goes, you brought it up a few times. Mind I still think Naomi will be involved in Zoey coming back into play and I am so ready for it. THere is alot to this story I am still looking forward to.
Also I am like the others have said ok with the parents taking a break this arc. I can really only take so much of them before I want to strangle each of them.
Author's Response:
Hey Ralgar,
I am in fact, having a good new year.
I'm glad you're liking Naomi, there's definitely a lot more of her coming up. I'll take your suggestions and see if I can implement them in later chapters if there's space.
Lol I'm glad you're a Chloe fan--I am too.
Nell and Naomi's relationship is already so strained, that I think Annabelle imprinting on Nell behind Naomi's back would cause some serious consequences for the sisters--or even the entire Sano family.
Also, I get the whole thing with the BSA adults, lol, they can be a lot.
I always appreciate your support, Ralgar.
Thanks for commenting!
Date: January 09 2023 7:42 PM Title: The Beginning
Poor Nell. Has to do without despite a possible size fetish due to a moral code. No wonder she is obsessed on Annabelle, since Annabelle is virtually THE solution to the moral dilemma. Annabelle should just beware, since Nell can likewise only see her as a "means to an end".
Nell's good nature to Annabelle in the end serves less to take Annabelle's will into consideration, but to satisfy her own moral gut feeling, to finally be able to live out her size fetish without "bellyache".
Poppy also seems to have sensed that Nell has the potential to degrade one into an object.
Author's Response:
That's a really good point Yeso. Annabelle really is the perfect answer for her.
...Ugh, I like wrote an entire paragraph as a response to this comment, but I can't post it without spoiling the next chapter. So instead I'm just going to say you are extremely astute. I'm interested in what you'll think of the upcoming chapter then.
Date: January 03 2023 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks rubber, I try :)
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 35
Another wonderful chapter, thank you - having some difficulty with the fact my sister is called Nell. As it's a slightly unusual name, it's too associative. I hope you don't mind but I copy and pasted into a separate document and changed her name to Marissa haha.
This isn't the reason, but I'm also hoping Nell isn't the one Poppy imprints on. I like the fact that one of the evil FF will get their way, or even better, Zoey.
Happy New Year to you!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA, I'm sorry for briefly traumatizing you. I'm glad you were able to fix that issue.
I get the sense that Nell (or Marissa to you) is too kind for a lot of people. If you want Annabelle to suffer then I guess I see your perspective.
I do wonder if you'll think the same when as the story goes on.
Thanks for your comment, redfoot, it made me chuckle.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
It is nice to see Anna getting some reprieve from her constant torture at the hands of the foursome. Getting to honestly express her genuine feelings with somebody who will listen is refreshing for both her and fans of her eventually regaining her freedom at the end of this. Nell is a tremendous influence and ally for her thus far in their time together.
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Putting Anna right back to work I see.
At-least there was a bright spot in she might have achieved something helpful for somebody without it leading to more bloodshed or mangling from the BSA. A small victory for our perilous heroine as she fights the good fight against the insurmountable odds she's up against right now.
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A really touching scene unfolding here.
Nell seems like the best friend Anna has right now outside of Stephen and Bite...and in the same way Anna might be the only friend Nell in her own struggles with the foursome. This is a breath of fresh air for us in Anna's corner and maybe putting even more in Nell's the more time she spends with Anna and their relationship grows.
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Something tells me if Anna wasn't against the entire fucking world that she could play the foursome off one another to formulate a plan of escape from them. Much more difficult with the BSA behind them but the cracks seem to be definitely there in terms of each wanting Anna for themselves.
Perhaps maybe even Nell could give the powder keg a little nudge to set the explosion in motion.
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Well well well...a lot to unpack here.
1. If Nell is somehow friends with or indirectly via another party somehow connected to Zoey this will be a game changer in many ways. Even more so if the foursome or Zoey learn about the others -true- natures involving Anna.
2. That was incredible!
The way you described Nell destroying the mantis underfoot and Anna's reaction was tremendous. I never suspected Nell saving her life would have the next time Anna had to watch a life snuffed out underfoot or the person snuffing it out.
3. What a twist...
General human kindness might be the one thing that gets Anna to imprint on anyone after a lifetime of getting shit on by just about everyone in her life. Not sure the outcome of the story but if Nell wins I look forward to the nuclear winter it will no doubt cause.
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The Sano parents have gotten their time to shine by poking and prodding Anna like a lab rat,
They are also the only family with a dynamic like Nell to play off of Naomi and her ferocity.
Author's Response:
Hey Adam thanks for the review!
Nell really is a great way to keep Annabelle sane. Something as simple as chess is a pretty big reprieve for Annabelle.
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Yeah, Annabelle is desperately trying to gain something from being humiliated by serving the FF. At this point, she's mostly given up on saving herself, but securing the Duforts' safety doesn't seem too out of reach.
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I'm sure I've mentioned it before, but I do enjoy writing Nell's and Annabelle's relationship, because it's one of the few times (outside of Steven and Byte, like you mentioned) that Annabelle gets to be herself. There's also something more powerful about their relationship being between a Shrinkee and a non-Shrinkee.
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As much as I'm enjoying the back ground of the FF, I honestly cannot fucking wait to write them all together. I think it will be really interesting to see how they interact with Annabelle as a group after they've all had their one-on-one extensive bonding time with her. Maybe you'll get to see those "cracks"--or maybe their bond truly is unshakeable.
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1. Hee hee, well I guess we know how that panned out.
2. Thank you! I don't a lot of chances to emphasize Annabelle's size through other small beings, so I kind of wanted to milk it lol.
3. Hahaha, then that might be the perfect reason to have Nell win (I'm joking...or am I?)
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As always, thanks for your review AdamX!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2023 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 35
This may sound weird but I'm starting to really dislike Nel. She is so nice and considerate and naive, she is just...boring hahaha it would be one of the worse endings if Anabelle imprinted on her, she is just so bland and boring. Also she is cutting into Naomi's time and we cant have that!I hope next chapter gives us more Naomi, the true Sano goddess.
As for the parents is fine. They are the least interesting ones of the parent group so is okay. I'm saying uninteresting a lot and it sounds like I'm hating, but I love it as always!I just have my favorites hahaha
Happy new year and thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, yeah I get it. But rest assured, Naomi will get her time to shine. Also, I'd keep watching Nell if I were you. She might end up surprising you...
Happy Belated New Year Naoru! Hope you're still enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2023 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 35
Idk if my comment got the spicy scene with Naomi or if it was already planned but either way I'm happy it happened. Great scene and great chapter. Honestly I miss the chapters that were more ff and poppy focused and less BSA.
Author's Response:
Lol it definitely was. I had another spicy scene with Naomi (it's still coming up soon), but I added that scene because you were right--Naomi/Annabelle spice was a bit lacking. I definitely don't mind taking suggestions as long as it fits within the story.
And yeah, I miss having all FF interacting with each other/Annabelle. Don't worry, they'll be back soon!
Thanks again for the idea, Tigerchevy!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!
Author's Response:
Happy belated New Year, Mr in A suit! Thanks for still reading!
Date: December 17 2022 4:06 AM Title: The Beginning
So my interest in her Mother being big, is granted mostly kink related ( mother/daughter stuff), how ever there is the aspect that her mother left after Her sisters " death". This also tied in with the fact that she didn't want children, I think it would be interesting for her to see her daughter shrunk and probably going see this was why I didn't want children. Would she be cruel, indifferent or would her mothering side try to come back ( mind I don't think Annabel would except and help from her mother by choice, but that's the rub and the interesting part, if her mother is still big, ANnebell would be in no shape to ignore her mother, i mean her Mother could force the issue of helping her or what ever, yes I'm kinky and wouldn't mind seeing a mother daughter scene, but i don't think it would fit this story,. (Poor Annabell, most of us want to see her have a very bad time).
So yea that's why I would like to see her mother, and her still be big. Of course her being small would also have alot of potential, I really don't want her to be dead. Of course that would mean even more characters in this already massive story.
I was wondering, if there was any chance of an update this month,(christmas gift) other wise see you next year. Hope you have a Merry CHristmas and a Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Haha, everyone wants Annabelle to be miserable. But without going into spoiler territory, I've been going back and forth with how I want to deal with the whole issue of Annabelle's backstory/parents. You've given me a pretty interesting perspective.
Thanks Ralgar!