Reviews For A Way Out
Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: October 21 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Truly weird, at least judging by the stories I usually read, but somehow I read it to the end and don't consider it a waste of time.
You may be onto something here, just please don't stop writing about Jackie :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I won't!
Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2019 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I could understand the concern with there being a lack of detail, but this was meant to be a short story. This was my first foray into this world, where men who are on the run have the option to shrink themselves and gain a female guardian. So for now, this is a self-contained work. I am open to writing a longer version in the future (maybe a few chapters, like a novella).
Date: October 03 2019 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice concept. I realize it's the first chapter, but it does lack a bit of detail {e.g. life in her panty drawer, what it's like to suckle by her, etc.}.
I truly hope you continue this story, it's really great.
It would be an interesting twist if Vanessa decided to control the height / smallness of his shrinking as you mentioned as an option, as this would add a lot of possibilities.
Author's Response: I could understand the concern with there being a lack of detail, but this was meant to be a short story. This was my first foray into this world, where men who are on the run have the option to shrink themselves and gain a female guardian. So for now, this is a self-contained work. I am open to writing a longer version in the future (maybe a few chapters, like a novella).