Reviews For The Malfunction
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Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2019 7:38 AM Title: Contact

Great chapter. Looks like Micah plans to use his mom to get rid of the rest of the school from the sound of it. Can’t wait to see the conclusion.

Author's Response:

Just noticed I never responded to this. Hope you enjoyed the conclusion! Your observation was rather astute as well.

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2019 6:30 AM Title: A Mother Scorned

Great chapter, curious to see what will happen with that mom since she’s in a pretty dangerous position. Looks like Micah’s got some secret he’s keeping from everyone else. Also I realized his mom is wearing a skirt not pants so I guess my idea would need to be modified lol

Author's Response:

Yeahhh I've been light on description to allow better use of the imagination, though I guess the clothes are something I should be more cognizant of for the giant characters. Still though, appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2019 8:14 PM Title: A Mother Scorned

very well written



Author's Response:

Appreciate it!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2019 6:36 AM Title: So close, yet even closer.

The story is great so far. I like the characters and the mom is a fun. I’m always down for more butt stuff, maybe one of them falls down the back of her pants and is stuck wedged against her thong. Also Im Curious about what if ms. Wraith was a giant instead?

Author's Response:

Appreciate the response!

Of course, I don't want to give too much away... I'll just say that things are going to get rather interesting with the box in the coming chapters. And I'll see what I can do about butt stuff.

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