[Report This]Date: July 14 2019 10:35 PM Title: The Experiment
God, I loved this, It's a shame that it was years ago... I hope you'll countinue this masterpiece... someday
[Report This]Date: February 18 2017 9:48 PM Title: The Experiment
WHY WRITE A STORY JUST GETTING STARTED AND JUST STOP AND DO'NT FINISH IT WAS WELL WTITEN.I WOULD GIVE A HIGHER RATING BUT NOT A NUFFE TO READ
[Report This]Date: January 07 2017 4:56 PM Title: The Experiment
Really liked the story hit all the notes i enjoy, im wondering if you ever plan on updating it?
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it.
I have plans for how to continue this story, but there's a couple other stories I'm going to write first.
Date: September 18 2016 10:44 AM Title: The Experiment
This was excellent. Well written and nicely descriptive. The fantasy aspect appeals to me as well. I like how gentle and protective Valeria is towards Garren (though the motherly angle gives this a slightly creepy factor. At least he's adopted and not actually her son). Had a feeling the second potion would fail so I look forward to reading more of Garren's shrunken adventures.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the story. I'm a fan of your work and your praise means a lot.
When I started writing this, the mother/son relationship wasn't planned, but I realized that if Garren had lived full-time with Valeria for years (as an apprentice would in a medieval/renaissance time period) and they had a close relationship then that's the form it would probably take. I saw an opportunity to write a playful and mothering giantess character, and it was too good to pass up. I could see how the kiss scene might be pushing it into incest territory, but I always thought of it more as a cute thing than a sexual one.
I hope the foreshadowing wasn't too heavy handed on the ending. Garren has no idea what kind of shrunken shenanigans lay in his future.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 11:39 AM Title: The Experiment
Wow, simply amazing. Maybe she'll decide to keep him as a toy
Author's Response:
Thank you. Valeria won't go quite that far, but the size difference will definitely put a strain on her relationship with Garren.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 8:47 AM Title: The Experiment
Intriguing start! I almost thought this was going to be an epic one-shot.
Author's Response:
It's somewhere in between a one-shot and a chapter. A short story in a series of stories.
Date: September 17 2016 5:26 AM Title: The Experiment
Me ha gustado mucho,me gustan los personajes BBW,ojala salgan mas personajes asi y descripciones de sus enormes cuerpos Enhorabuena
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 2:53 AM Title: The Experiment
Loved it. Definitely wanting to see more from these two. Hopefully Valeria stays gentle
[Report This]Date: September 16 2016 9:54 PM Title: The Experiment
Some of my favorite things to find in a story like this, the maternal angle and the descriptions as well as the internal battles over morality were all very fun.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. As it turns out those are some of my favorite things, too. Maternal stuff especially is rare to find without abuse or heavy incest (or both).
[Report This]Date: September 16 2016 9:24 PM Title: The Experiment
Excellent stuff, a real pleasure to read. Lots of new stuff, and both of the characters are intriguing to read. Well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. A lot of the little details in this story will be expanded on later or used to set up future plots. I tried to make the exposition feel natural but it might've been too heavy at times.