Date: April 28 2016 9:26 PM Title: World of Vorecraft
This was a very touching read. I'm not much of a foot person myself, but I don't shun people who are and I was really glad that Troy got a happy ending.
The writing and characters were solid and nicely done (I wanted to whack Vince Vane upside the head >_>), and the whole Minimizer concept would be a macrophile's dream come true, maybe even a practical device for things besides recreation as the story touched upon.
Overall, good job, mate.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this story despite its heavy focus on feet. :)
Yeah, the Minimizer Program would be a huge boon to have for a myraid of reasons, and sometimes I wish something like it did exist. But sadly, as things are not, it's impossible.
And I'm certain many people want to give Vince a piece of their mind or two. At least Troy and Dawn managed to screw with him a bit. XD
Date: April 21 2016 4:57 PM Title: World of Vorecraft
I actually just created an account to tell you what an amazing story this was. It seems like some other writers get all the credit on this site (and they are great too), but you've done an excellent job here.
Despite my recent account creation, I've been a fan of you since bugman games. Please do keep it up!
-Bryce
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you enjoyed this story to its conclusion, and that you've been reading my stuff since my very first macro story. I'll definitely keep writing as much as I can.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2016 10:04 PM Title: World of Vorecraft
Very well written. The characters are great. I found it especially cool that you had two characters with the same name. Nice touch.
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
Glad you liked that. That was a sort of gag I put in to try to throw off readers due to the title of that chapter and that they were both introduced there, but I guess it's not hard to figure out what's going on. lol
[Report This]Date: April 03 2016 8:26 PM Title: Crush Hour; or, How Troy Got His Groove Back
Amazing chapter!!! Love the call back to Bugman Games. Sad that it's concluding so soon because the world and the charaters you've created feel so real, yet as at the same time it feels like the story is reaching a good conclusion point. Can't wait to see what you have in store next.
(P.S what is the chances of a continuation to or revised version of Greg's Bizarre Experiance? Really enjoyed that story too :) )
(P.P.S I have no idea how there are not more reviews for this story)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Yeah, it does seem like it's ending too soon, but I never really intended for it to go on for long, anyway. Hell, I actually originally envisioned it as only having 5-7 parts, so the nine that it will end with is actually an extension of sorts. That said, I feel like with this world I've made, I want to explore it some more, so I may do a follow-up at some point, or do some other stories set in its world. If the story was more popular, then I'd even open it up as a sandbox setting for anyone to utilize in their own works.
I'm glad that the Bugman Games references weren't lost on you, and speaking of my older stories, I do have plans to revise and continue GBE very soon, especially after reading through what I have now and where I left off. In fact, I'm also going to revise and post an updated Bugman Games as well, especially since the original story, while ambitious and rather popular, was also pretty sloppy.
(P.S. Yeah, but like I said before, I'm thankful for the reviews I do get.)
[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 8:29 AM Title: Radiant Dawn
I'm not great at positive reviews; everything I say sounds hyperbolic (or worse, sarcastic). But I've really loved this story, and especially how well-developed a character Troy is. This last chapter was cathartic, which just goes to show how invested I've become.
Keep up the good work! (Seriously, please keep it up. I can't wait till the next chapter.)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll be sure to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. :)
And don't be afraid of how you come across in reviews. I appreciate every bit of commentary.
Date: February 28 2016 1:06 AM Title: Radiant Dawn
Man i have to say. Your story deserves way more reviews then what its gotten. Its well written and easily one of my favorites. The set up is flawless and the characters seem real and life like. Your style of writing is...how can i put this...just amazing..simply amazing. I was hoping you would update and Troy would find someone that match him. Great chapter!! I can't wait till the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Admittedly, I do get a bit jealous when I see the dozens of reviews that other stories have, even ones with only a few chapters, but I'm thankful for the reviews that I do get.
I'm really glad you're enjoying this story, though I should mention that the end is pretty near. Hopefully you stick around for the ride just a little while longer. :)
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 3:01 AM Title: Radiant Dawn
This story and this chapter are beyond Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll be sure to deliver. :)
Date: January 17 2016 3:29 AM Title: World of Vorecraft
You know, I was never into vore and stuff because the guy has to die, which means the bond between him and the giantess is lost forever. But this resplendent thing, I like it :D
Author's Response:
Yep! For those of us who are into crush or vore or whatever, if it were to happen, we could only experience it once, and depending on whatever the afterlife is, it's possible that we would not be able to remember our death at all.
With this method, it gives people the opportunity to be killed or consumed in their favorite ways over and over again, and turn it into a recreational activity.
It does bring up questions about how such a thing works, of course. :p
Date: October 31 2015 3:59 AM Title: World of Vorecraft
This first chapter really caught my attention, I can't wait to see more soon!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2015 9:29 PM Title: World of Vorecraft
I wanted to hit her after she said David tennant was a bad doctor
Great story :)
Author's Response:
Haha, I actually debated on whether it should be David or Matt Smith that she'd dog, but I settled with David because he's my personal favorite so at least for me, it'd be more of a gutpunch.
But I'm glad you liked it. :)