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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal

WOW!

Great opener for the last act. Especially as it erases my previous suspicion that Gabby was now a double-agent for the Swords. And, particularly, because I get to leave the debut review for once!

Author's Response:

Indeed, Gabby was never a double agent. Though, honestly, did you think someone as.... unsubtle as Gabby could have ever been a double agent? Her tactics are pretty much limited to hit the problem till it goes away.

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