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Reviewer: IsabelChris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2019 3:08 AM Title: Love Is In The Air

What a great story again! I never would know that it was Bobby who's shrinking people for his cousin!

I did read people reviewing your stories and giving less starts because it "doesn't have so much vore" and all, but for me you story is very well balanced! I'm reading all the voreverse stories as if I was reading some suspense book. For a so well developed plot as this one, I guess the vore action is in the exactly right level. Well, for me those teens burp a little too much (they burp for an empty stomach, for a full tomach, when filling stomach, when talking.........), but it doesn't count as the story's so good!

Again, I can't wait to read the next stories!

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2015 2:23 AM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

very good!

I'm looking forward to more stories.

More Acrecente digestion (body dissolving until feces).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 11:57 PM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

Really nice seeing it came to a happy ending for everyone, well mostly everyone :3 Really like how it came out in the end. There were a few minor things which I would had seen different, but that's not me to criticis about. The ending was a bit short played out, especially it would had made more sense Simon asking of what happened to Bobby. I loved how Tommy seemed to get a boner of hearing his gf digesting haha :3



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I wasn't able to make it too long cause i had to balance my college, work, and trying to get somethign special for my gf for Valentine's Day, but next time if you could please go into detail on what was actually wrong to justify your lower rating, that would be great! Just so that I know what I need to work on so I can write better chapters and endings!

Reviewer: Prodi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 11:37 AM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

A great ending for a great story. I love your work and am really looking forward to your next story.

I have to admit, for a moment, I really thought Tommy would die and feared this could be the last story of your series. So glad he and Simon survived :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it and thank you for the five star rating!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 3:05 PM Title: Hunger Pains

So great plot and really nice twist at the end, cant wait for the last chapter :-]



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2015 4:21 PM Title: Love Is In The Air

Ahh! :-) Cant wait for the final chapter!! I know I shouldnt but still hoping for some ideas used in the final one!! Really liked the idea of the couple finding the box of where Bobby kept the shrink ray in, didnt think of that possibility. And I guess Tommy isnt a goner right, he'll mostly ride on that burp out into freedem again haha, or is still glued somehow in her mouth with some spit near her esophagus entrance. Really clever and interesting cliffhanger there in the bathroom!! I guess stupid Bobby knocked himself out by smashing his head against the wall lol. Now it's up to Simon taking the shrink ray from him, find somehow Tommy, grow him back and let Tommy decicde what to do with Bobby ;p Loved the part where even Tommy was near of being consumed getting a slightly boner from the view of his gf. Really great story and Im sure the final chapter will be epic !!! <3



Author's Response:

Thanks! I;ll have chapter 5 up next week!

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 2:04 PM Title: Love Is In The Air

I re-sent it, did you get it this time? If not just write your mail in here or sent me a message over here (:



Author's Response:

jasonsalisbury2@hotmail.com Try that.

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 1:58 PM Title: Bon Appetit

Excellent story

I am eager to continue.
Show more digestion, until faeces.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll try to have the next chapter up next week!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 11:53 AM Title: Bon Appetit

Awesome chapter!! Sent you a mail on here hoep you got it because it was a little bit longer than something to post as an review :-) Hope to hear back what you think and all and if you didnt get it, just say so here. Loving the plot so much already!! Cant wait for the next! Hope to hear from you back over mail, and have a nice weekend!!



Author's Response:

Sorry, I didn't get it. I accidentally had a typo in email page. Try sending it again!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2015 6:40 AM Title: Burps and Kisses

Damn what a great plot twist, can't wait to see more. Loving it already dude. This chapter was a bit short but liked it much more than the first one, mostly because of all the hot little parts about Tommy and Jenny as a first hint. Would also like seeing a mixed vore of the guys and girls at some point, really enjoyed the burping parts, did Tommy unknowingly ingest some micros there? Keep it up man!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the response! Sorry, I'm just not really into male vore, but I'll make sure to have lots of it for the girls in the coming chapters! Speaking of which, I'm uploading a new one right now.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 4:53 AM Title: Burps and Kisses

Ahhh!! I'm speechless! Wow, I really loved this chapter so much <3 Even if it's shorter than most others, and it's still introduction and "nothing special" really happened, please believe me when I say, this chapter is totally under my favorite chapters Ive read of yours, actually I would say it's on rank 2 and the last final chapter of your Christmas story is on 1 :-) But what does this chapter make so special to me? These parts:

"Tommy got a boner just from looking at her, but he tried to hide it from Jenny"

"He could feel the boner coming on and imagined ramming his penis deep into her vagina. Thrusting, moaning, kissing her boobs, nuzzling his face into her belly as his dick found her sweet spot and the climax hit them."

"Tommy thirstily gulped his down and felt the cold soda pop rush into his stomach. It made him gassy, so he burped. All the girls looked at him, and Claudia decided she could do better. She drained her Sprite and gave an even bigger burp."

"As they waiting for their massive amounts of food to arrive, Tommy’s stomach felt weird. He burped again, that felt better, but then he suddenly needed to go pee."

I just loved the parts so much always where Tommy got a boner because of looking or thinking about Jenny, I love these kind of erotic moments so much, especially about what Tommy might think in these very moments and what he must picture in is mind.

The whole part of Tommy draining the coke and burping is so awesome, my favorite part <3 Please say that there were some tiny micros in his coke he uknowingly swallowed and booked a one trip through his digestive tract, I loved this idea so much especially combined with the part "Tommy’s stomach felt weird. He burped again, that felt better, but then he suddenly needed to go pee". If so, it would be awesome reading the POV of those micros again of what happened.

I love the concept of those rude boys, who seem to get some taste of their owen medicine ;-)

And now... I dont really know where to start to talk about the ending of this fantastic chapter, and about Bobby. Damn, what a cliffhanger and fantastic idea. It seems Bobby snapped during the last couple of days/weeks because of his gf got eaten, and especially how Tommy and Simon were so careless about it. And especially how Tommy didnt quit with that "bitch" Jenny, who did this to him, indirectly. I would imagine Bobby got "insane" and the sadness and hate grew bigger, and he also grew it against his "friends" Tommy and Simon. So Bobby became the "bad guy", right? :x

I loved this part so so much:

“There must be a second shrink ray.”Bobby nodded, then walked over to the door and leaned up against the wall, as if to talk to all of them. “I thought of another possibility though, something simpler.”“What?” Tommy asked.

Hahaha :x Loved that total surprise which came out of nowhere, fantastic idea man. Like Tommy got the most logical idea, and it seemed totally reasonable, and than... oops, sorry, nope, Im the bad guy.

I'm so damn curiosu now how it continues. So Bobby shrunk them all, Drew, Rob... and Tommy. I hope they all got really tiny, around ant size :x

I also love the idea of if there were some other micros in Tommys coke before, that they were so small now and in Tommys bowls, that a normal sized person wouldnt even see them anymore and theyre smaller than dust particles.

So Bobby wanted revenge for what that bitch Jenny did to his gf, and in his hate and sadness he somehow got the mad reason that it was all Tommys fault, and if Tommy wasnt such an "asshole" it wouldnt make it all look so more sad and worse to him, but he chose to stay with that "monster" Jenny, and didnt care about his feelings. And Bobby got the idea of, well, if that's what Tommy wanted, he would show him what it was like for Francise, and what she went through, digested and turned into shit.

I would love to see a scene where Bobby thrw the three tiny ant sized boys into a bowl of white onion dip, with tiny little onion particles and tiny black pepper dots. The micros would totally look like tiny pepper dots and no one would notice them in there, especially because of the white thick dip, which covered their bodies, their clothes, and if they were driven in, it would even be on their heads and their faces, totally marking them white and melt into the white onion background.

The total humiliation would be, if Simon would snack from the dip and scoop up his friend Tommy and one or the other two boys, Rob and Drew. There could be a "battle" inside Simons mouth like this is all your fault you freak, talking to Tommy, about his weirdo friend. They were all spared of swallowing and just be glued into a thick salvia mixed dip white spit slime on Simons tongue, and while fighting some bad luck would happen causing Rob or Drew to slip and land face first into the slimy goe and sliding backwards towards the back of the mouth, and suddenly the tongue would rise into two parts, because Simon was swallowing the left over spit and dip goe in his mouth, causing Tommy was at this moment on the front part and "safe", but poor Rob or Drew gets swallowed. Just like the middle part of the tongue would devide the mouth into two parts, the front safe part, and everything behind the middle tongues part would be send backwards into the slimey abyss causing a swallow reflex. Of course Tommy would survive though maybe when Simon laughed and spit a tiny bit of dip/spit, Tommy glued into it like into a water drop.

In the end of course I would love Bobby taste his own medicine and got somehow shrunk too to ant size and book a one way trip throuhg hell :-x

Thank you so much again for writing, I hope you liked my review as always <3 And you saw how much this chapter meant to me!! You said at the end you wanted to here if things worked out different. YES!! They did :3 I would love seeing these things more often, what I talked about, and the three examples I put out. Loved the burp parts so much of Tommy, and the ones where he got a boner because of Jenny <3

Please have an amazing Sunday!! You rock <3



Author's Response:

Wow! This chapter had more to it than I realized! I'm very glad you liked it so much, and while there will be unaware vore, I'm not sure that there will be any involving Tommy or Simon - but I wanted to include the parts about Tommy burping to kinda make up for that. You are completely right about Bobby and his motivations and I am looking forward to writing what he and the waitress do next. There will be lots of unaware vore and burping from the girls tho, so just hang on tight for the next chapter! Thanks again, Im really glad you loved the chapter!

Reviewer: Ariannabear Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 5:53 PM Title: Love Is In The Air

Hello! I am interested what'll happen next! And I can see why Bobby shrank them, his friends were being a bit inconsiderate when his girlfriend got eaten right before his eyes. Poor guy. Plus Tommy did start to date the unaware murderer of Bobby's girlfriend... If that happened to me, (I'm a girl so it would be vice versa) I would feel a bit more than petty anger. But nonetheless, your writing is quite good and the plot is interesting (I usually hate vore and GTS but your story is one that has me hooked! Kudos to you~! Adieu! ^_^

-Arianna

Author's Response:

Glad your hooked and that you like Bobby's motivations. Thank you very much for reviewing and Ill do my best to keep the story interesting!

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 12:39 PM Title: Burps and Kisses

Always a big fan of your stories. Cant wait to see where you take this one



Author's Response:

Thanks! i always like to here that people keep reading my series it makes my day! I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 8:49 AM Title: Love Is In The Air

Nice!!! Great to see you back, this looks really promising already! I loved your last story so much, especially for Tommy and his new gf and the ending chapter was just the best. So great to see a sequel to the plot to come :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the new chapter too, I just put it up!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 6:29 PM Title: Love Is In The Air

Heeey :') Finally, youre back!! So excited already, and of course, as promised, I will review from here to the end. I cant really give more stars because I dont know where it's going from here, but because I know your other work, Ill start with a 8 :3 I would really like to give wishes and ideas for the next chapters, but you said you dont want to hear that and you mostly have already planed the whole story :( I would love it much more if you try to build in wishes and ideas, for example your final chapter of your last story was so great of how you implemented those cup ideas with Tommy and Simon. But coming back to this story, I loved so much already how Jenny was clueless and even talked in a rude way about Francine in front of Tommy and Simon, not knowing she sent her on a one way trip through her digestive tract: “I have cute friend named Crystal who Bobby might like, ever since Francine left him,” Jenny said. She let out a soft belch, then covered her mouth and giggled. Also loved how Bobby was really pissed about the fact Tommy and Simon not really cared about what happened to Francine, and how Tommy didnt break up with Jenny after what "she did". I hope so much Bobby gets swallowed too in this story, it would be a fitting ending for him. I know you said you didnt like male vore much but still hope doesnt left me (: Im not sure what to think about the upcoming location because of that Love Bite reference and a tripple date. Thats not much a critism just a personal taste, I dont really like locations like cafes/burger places or restaurants much in a vore story. But it's so nice you finally back :)) And Im sure the story will come out great as all of your work. Hope this review cheers you up :)) Have a nice Sunday!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's not that I don't like your ideas for future chapters and stuff, its just that i've got most of this story worked out already and I'm actually pretty excited where its going to go! They're will be lots and lots of unaware vore, but the restaurant is the main setting. You'll see why and I think it will still work, but once again thanks for reviewing! It really means a lot to me that you always give feedback on my chapters no matter what! Now Im going to go write the second chapter!

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