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Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2012 7:32 AM Title: Crucified

Good story. I tend to like cruel aspects like this one and vengeful jealous girls. Hope to see more from u in the future and thanks for sharing

Reviewer: Thornton Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2012 10:18 PM Title: Crucified

Wow.

I always knew that I had a thing for the violent and dominant giantess. But this stuff has opened my eyes quite a bit. It made it better that I lived with a French girl called Camille for a year... although she did match Penny's description moreso.

Oh, and you said that Cody was on the bed, and Camille was gyrating on him... but you never mentioned that he got up. You just went on to say that Penny poked him angrily before crushing his toes. In my head, he was still on the bed, which made me stop for a second... it's the only thing that took away from the flow of the story.

Loved the fact that when Cody woke up, he didn't realise he was small, and tried to think up a means of escape for himself and Camille. It was a really nice touch that Camille knew of the shrinking beforehand. I loved how it dawned on him.

Strange confession, I found the part where Erinn wiped the remains of Camille on her pants to be erotic, I have no idea. Feel free to laugh at me.

I didn't really like Sean all that much, it was like he was overcompensating to be in the dominant male role. That, and I didn't like how the whole lead up with Cody, only to be discarded in a waste bin. I felt cheated, I thought that he would have had a much more interesting demise than to be crushed by a terrible role player.

That said, it was an enjoyable read... but it doesn't beat one of your other stories. I have to say, my ideal woman, is currently a few inches tall, and bound to a stupid wizard. I'll give you a clue, she's also a demon.

Thornton





Author's Response:

>“What the fuck are you doing in here, you crazy bitch!?” He screamed at her, rising to his feet. He stormed towards her...

He totally did get up! I like to think I have a really good ability to play out scenes in my head so it'd be weird if I missed something like that, but thanks for keeping me on my toes at least! Also if you were reading my erotic fiction and got turned on by it, I did my job. No need to feel bad there.

Also maybe there will be a crossover! (There will not be a crossover.) But maybe I'll write Chapter 3 soon! (That's more likely.)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2012 1:34 PM Title: Crucified

I had a really nice reply prepared about how reading this at times made me(a known gore whore in the past) feel akward and even sympathetic to the protagonists(especially Carm) but I simpally don't have the proper working for it at the monet.

Very well done my dear, 



Author's Response:

>at the monet

Kidding aside, thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope to keep making you squirm uncomfortably in the future!

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