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Reviewer: Lester Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow so immortality comes with a catch. I'm guessing that means she won't need anyone new from the town right?



Author's Response:

it does indeed come with a catch.  i'm not really sure though about others, i suppose it's up to the reader's imagination at this point

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love the goddess character. LOVED the feet scenes. Wish there was more as your attention to detail is crazy good. Love everything about her character. Perfect Goddess.



Author's Response:

thanks; i'm glad i can still deliver on the foot scenes when i've written so many of them in the past

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

truly awesome tale. wonder how 'vaw' will amuse his goddess?

aaron

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a nice little short story. I like the theme and hope the boy is gruesomely dealt with! I hope we don't have to wait for long to see what becomes of him!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review; the next/final chapter will show what will become of him

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love the feet stuff, would like to see more!



Author's Response:

probably won't be any more in this story, but definitely in my next

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response:

thanks, glad you like it

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well this is an interesting twist. Perhaps Nari will earn more respect.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

this story is turning out to be a great read. hope to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story quite a bit. Great job as always.

Dave



Author's Response: thanks man

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it.  Simple, to the point, descriptive.  A good story all around!



Author's Response: thanks for reading!

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