Date: October 07 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: August 24 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow so immortality comes with a catch. I'm guessing that means she won't need anyone new from the town right?
Author's Response:
it does indeed come with a catch. i'm not really sure though about others, i suppose it's up to the reader's imagination at this point
Date: August 23 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the goddess character. LOVED the feet scenes. Wish there was more as your attention to detail is crazy good. Love everything about her character. Perfect Goddess.
Author's Response:
thanks; i'm glad i can still deliver on the foot scenes when i've written so many of them in the past
Date: August 22 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
truly awesome tale. wonder how 'vaw' will amuse his goddess?
aaron
Date: August 22 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a nice little short story. I like the theme and hope the boy is gruesomely dealt with! I hope we don't have to wait for long to see what becomes of him!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review; the next/final chapter will show what will become of him
Date: August 21 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the feet stuff, would like to see more!
Author's Response:
probably won't be any more in this story, but definitely in my next
Date: August 21 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you like it
Date: August 20 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well this is an interesting twist. Perhaps Nari will earn more respect.
Date: August 20 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
this story is turning out to be a great read. hope to see more.
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
Date: August 18 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story quite a bit. Great job as always.
Dave
Author's Response: thanks man
Date: August 17 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. Simple, to the point, descriptive. A good story all around!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!