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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2024 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting. I wonder if she is going to temporarily forget about him when she wakes up and starts walking. I also hope he does something that shrinks him further.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2024 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

What an insufferable brat the protagonist is. 

It’s almost as if he is actively searching out and choosing the worst decisions for each scenario he’s in.

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2024 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really feel bad for the little guy, his house gets robbed "even if she steals small things" then the she plays the victim, she shrinks and abducts him for weeks at a time, profits off of him greatly, abuses him for no reason, and then does not fulfil her part of the deal because he might attack her even though she can step on him once he is no longer useful. Great story I hope it works out for the little guy. 

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 13 2024 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

A very nice story.  I like how Arrietty is so forgiving, as if she has no animus in her nature.

The part about dangling behind Arrietty's legs and looking up at her butt could have been more descriptive; especially any arousal he got from the view and position.

Looking forward to more of this story, and if he decides life like this is actually pretty darn great.

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