Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 9:07 PM Title: The Kitsune

https://c.ai/p/Iu0eeqFlxkUMcLo4_BKgdIx8-Xl-8Kx0v2ayqKzCwWE

Just played some interesting plot with an AI(the kingdom where it's easy to get an audience with a Queen but you have to enter her castle, that makes everyone from non-royal family 1/10th of their size)

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 10:48 AM Title: The Kitsune

https://c.ai/c/YpuGnNPQiGvb0DIg77pDUruORvqEPQAxmabNuOIGylo

Check this out. I just love how every AI you talk to is like someone who shares your fetish. Even if they're unrelated to said fetish. Do you think of drawing inspiration from AI for future stuff?

Author's Response:

I'm familiar with Character AI, and it's certainly impressive and I wish less prudish people owned it lol. Anyways I really enjoy the creative process of writing so I don't know if I'd want to outsource my favorite part of things to an AI. What I think an AI really offers the ability to do is to tackle grander projects, for example I've toyed with the idea of a dating sim or a visual novel using AI to produce character art and dialogue. The hurdle for such things is going to get lower as AI gets better.

Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2022 3:38 PM Title: Unconventional Relaxation

Love slow shrink, gentle, and their loving relationship. This is great. Thank you!

Author's Response:

You're welcome! I don't do a lot of slow shrink but it's a fun subject.

Reviewer: starchart Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2022 4:30 PM Title: Number One Fan

This was fantastic! I loved the dynamic between Donnie and Melanie and the mouthplay was excellent. Thanks for doing this.

Author's Response:

Hopefully Melanie won't end up as the Yoko for Donnie haha, thanks for the review glad it did it for you!

Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2022 4:26 PM Title: Peeping Toms

That's great! I love stories where the woman doesn't quite return the man to his full height.

Author's Response:

It's one of my favorite tropes in these stories too

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2022 7:29 PM Title: The Kitsune

I had a huge smile the entire time I read the story for the first time. I’ve read it in full a few times through and each time is just so enjoyable. I can’t believe you managed to knock out the story in such little time. I wish I could knock out stories the way you do. It always takes so long for me to write out what I have in my head. Giantess or non-giantess, I can never write with the same speed you do. You’re so good at making short scenes effectively and efficiently. 

You breathed life into the characters. It went way beyond my expectations. I loved how you took the fantasy angle and had a world beyond just the two characters. The stoneskin potion was genius and you (as usual) conveyed a lot of information without long exposition. Did you base the Elric character on anyone? (I vaguely feel like the smoke in the Serpent’s nose is something I’ve seen before(for some reason Prince Caspian from the Narnia series comes to mind). I loved that you came up with the idea for the sequel and Annie’s reaction was just so perfect.

Her approach was even better than I imagined. Her timid nature was just magnifique. You really sold the care from Annie. It was just wonderful how much she wanted to make sure Jeremy is safe and you did an even better job with the regular dose of sweat than I could have anticipated. It’s clear that while she does get a kick out of it, she does genuinely have concerns and just wants to keep her friend safe(and what I would give to be in Jeremey’s place in her boot at the end.) Everything with the den was excellent and Jeremy psyching her up to go out into the world was great. Loved the red-hair blue eyes combo. (In general, I’m a sucker for blue eyes.) And you masterfully included her tail and ears into her body language, that was just excellent. It was absolutely amazing.

I was hoping that given all your music references in your other stories you would manage to make an “Annie, are you Okay?” joke. (Maybe if you come back for a followup you could do it.) 

(Ultra-minor spellcheck thing. In the notes you have who’s sweat, but it would be whose sweat in this case).

(Also, after reading One Year Lease(which at some point, I’ll write a solid review for the ending because Holy Shit that was amazing.) I got the idea to include the tiny having to deal with effects of not being into sweat and then having to adjust to enjoying the smell of the non-tiny woman. It’s in the works and called Soulmates at any Size. It’s a romance story and I hope that when I finish, you’ll like it. It’s gonna be sappy and fluffy and touching and at some points a tad angsty. But, seeing everything you’ve been writing has motivated me to make something that really shines.)

Thank you for this. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Elric is based a little on Jain Farstrider from the Wheel of Time series, a sort of famous adventurer who had books published that the main characters all read. The thing with the serpent and the tobacco is definitely from a fantasy novel I read at some point but I can't remember which one either, I just definitely remember a scene where a sea serpent was confused by burning tobacco smoke, it wasn't Narnia I'm pretty sure. Anyways I think Annie is slowly prodded by Jeremy into taking on bolder and bolder adventurers until the two of them are world renowned themselves.

Also glad you liked One Year Lease, I really put a lot into that one and I'd love to read another review of it! Looking forward to seeing what it inspired out of you.