It's awesome that you're uploaden still/again! I loved the mouth scene in this one. And while I agree with your unawareness point in that it makes the situation more dire, the aware scenario is usually my favourite one. Having said that, really neat story you have here

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I spent a good bit of time thinking about the mouth and all that he might do, as well as how it would look and feel to him inside it. I am about evenly split on aware versus unaware vore although most of my stores are aware vore. I do like the irony that his wife is wandering around the house, looking for her husband, calling his name, wondering where he might be, and all the while he is fighting for his life inside her. 

Great story. I am sure that Lamarun would like it. Stacy remains lovable through the entire story, while John, foolish and selfish person that he is, is swallowed. The reader feels sorry for them both here, as they both experience loss. 

You make some interesting points on unaware vore that I had not considered. It is a great way for the girl to eat a guy without her being a monster. I also like the reasoning that unaware vore makes the situation more intense. One could imaging being about to be swallowed while thinking, "If only I could let her know that I'm here she wouldn't eat me." It does add a good phycological aspect to the story that might be lacking from those where the woman knows what she's doing. 

Also I have to say that it's great you are still occasionally posting stories. You were always one of my favorite authors when I first began writing here as girlfrrod and later on Deviant Art as Marius-the-Mage. Thank you for the inspiration and for the great writing. Hope to see more of your work when you have time.