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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2024 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7: Without Any Trace

Very well done story, though a bit more character interactions would be nice



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Love your 'A Rushed Marriage.' story too, by the way!

Yeah, I must say, this was one of my early stories and I was just too focused on the smut parts back then. Even I wish I could expand more on the character developments and more worldbuilding before reaching the climax of this arc right now.

To rectify all of that, my plan currently is to wrap up this one for now after the ongoing climax, I want to do a proper worldbuilding first on separate story as an origin of this whole Haven City series before moving on to the next arc.

Once again, thank you for the review!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2024 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Harsh Truth

Great to see this continue and welcome back!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! this is the longest chapter yet I didn't even realize it, maybe that's why it took a long time to make -_-'

Also, many new ideas that led to some changes from my initial plan.

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Love this story, reminds me of micropolis by microtopian, written 10 years ago. Wouldn't it be fun if one of the caretaker was a girl they hate? 



Author's Response:

That's an interesting suggestion, we'll see.


thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2024 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Otherside

YAY! YOUR BACK!!



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long, thank you for your patience! 

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2022 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence

Im just enjoying the story. And I say have fund with a whole scene of them going through theses ideas, maybe even as tour trying to com up with it, imagine the characters having the conversation and what they would come up with, add, or comment on. 

I eagerly await the next chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2022 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence

Ah, so if finally begins. And they have some fresh eyes to help brainstorm ideas. Cant wait to see that whole session snd thier imagining of how various aspects implemented would affect the “disposal” process. 


On diea ti add back to the once in the earlier review, once helpers/constructions giantesses, get involved, shoes and heels that act as carrier for them to then hop out if and into a city. And the appropriate deposal uniform (that has wedge heels imo). But it will be interesting when that part needs working out. 



Author's Response:

Well, I could take the clothing suggestion into consideration. I could see some potential in it, but I need to find and provide context for all that first.

Thanks for the input.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Great concept. Love it!

Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 7: Without Any Trace

Another great chapter!

And good to see you back!



Author's Response:

Many thanks! Hopefully I could continue this one.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

She might also be head disposal officer/specialist or something along those lines, sounds offical, since she is the first and has the most experience. And considering how imortant the feet are, the uniform/toolset that use them has got to be varied, not eveyone will be so good barefoot and might want a more distanced or separated approach via heels wedges of platforms of some varieties. 

 

But like you said, we'll have to wait and see. 

(also I get to give this story two 10 ratings)

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2021 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6: First to Fall

Another good chapter. 

Considering the rate at which thes disposals are happening, the company might need to formalise the process and have a little training for it, if only to make it profeinal since it is a corporat environment. Means also figuring out the toolset, uniform, terminology etc. And Jenny is in prime position to come up with is all. 



Author's Response:

Maybe when the feeling of control and power finally caught up to them, yeah, it's possible.

That's an interesting suggestion, thanks. We'll see.

Reviewer: sp180 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2021 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Long Night

I like the way things are developing between the different perspectives. Also, I like how more interaction is possible through the tech available

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2021 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Haven City is those kind of utopias which are actually destined to become a dystopia. I'm quite sure that if shrinking was possible they would do something like this (afterall they've already shown this idea in the movie Downsizing), and I would apply even if I believe:

- the city would be filled with cameras even in homes, to basically work as a big social experiment laboratory (they already did something similiar with rats, they built a rat city to study their behavior)

- those who control the city have sheer power and can do anything they want, while those inside are completely helpess. The owners would be scientists with zero etical issues

- there would be no sexy giantess :(



Author's Response:

Realistically, if shrinking tech do exist, this would be accurate. They would saw the public as mere subject for their research and experiments while giving full control to the owners.

 

No sexy giantess, this reality hurts deep in my soul :(

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2021 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: Brilliant Invention

Really like the opening so far. Can't wait to see what what jenny does with her tiny city 

Reviewer: Tinymanunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

This has potential to be so good! Maybe the two end up outside the dome, trapped between her toes, her unaware of it? 



Author's Response:

Anything could happen!

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