Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2020 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice little story.

It strongly reminds me of the Zelda Majora's Mask Fanfic "Quad Towers" as it also included four female characters becoming giants to defeat an ancient evil. (MM lends itself very well to it, given the four giants that you need to rescue and Majora's Moon looming overhead all the time.)

I have two questions and a mistake to point out though:

1. Isn't the name of Ranma's father "Tenma", not "Cenma"?

2. Akane the "Brunette", isn't she more of a "Blu(e)ette", given her blueish hair color?

3. "As the three huge young women watched the sun set, they realized that the years ahead would be hard. But, they were together at least." Shouldn't that be "four huge young women" Or am I missing something?

Author's Response:

Thanks for catching those!  Yeah, it's not Cenma , it's Genma according to the Fount Of All Knowledge, Wikipedia.  I haven't seen the anime in I don't know how long, so the bluenette part slipped by me.  And yeah, it's four not three.  

 

I guess I need to proofread closer.