Date: December 03 2023 5:46 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
I've been on this website for 3+ years. Never made an account. But this story was something else. All I can say is... Bra...fucking....O. Good shit mate
Author's Response:
Wow, I'm honored to hear that! Thank you! I'm overjoyed by how much love this story has garnered.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2023 7:13 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Such a good story! I love a slow burn and all your scenes are written so well. Couldn’t ask for a better ending. Can’t wait to read more of your work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm of the belief that a slow burn leads to a more satisfying payoff, so I'm happy to hear you appreciate that. I like to go all out with my endings, make them as happy/satisfying as can be. Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2023 11:19 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This has been a great one all around. After Mixing Sizes I had no doubts about your ability to write a good giantess-tiny relationship, but here you did it while also writing a good desert island story! The setting, the characters, the twists, the ending, I liked everything here.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to write something more plot-centric since slice of life is more of my go-to, and militaristic deserted island story seemed like it'd be fun to write. I'm glad to hear I pulled it off lol.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2023 6:34 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Great story from start to finish. I look forward to your next entries.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm already hard at work on some new stuff and am excited to put it out once it's ready.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2023 4:57 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
I really thought this story was the total package. Good characterization. Good descriptions of the environment, and some really nice sex scenes. I loved it! I could tell that you spell checked and went over grammar, and I wish more people would do that too. I will look for more of your writing in the future, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm quite proud of how this one turned out. Hearing that my environmental descriptions were good makes me happy because I struggle with that more than the other two things you mentioned (though I'm glad you enjoyed those too!). I always proofread and revise every chapter before uploading it. I think doing so is kinda the bare minimum when sharing writing. I take pride in this stuff, and it'd bother me if it were full of errors (admittedly, I can't always catch everything during revision, but I try my best). Thank you for appreciating that.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2023 7:43 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Amazing series, I was hooked right away! The storytelling and character development and relationship-building is superb! Always excited when I see a new chapter posted!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! The characters' development and how their relationship transformed are very important to this story and thus required a lot of effort (and stress) out of me, so it's good to see that paid off. I'm working hard on the next chapter as we speak!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2023 8:26 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This is one of the best stories I have seen here! But the end of chapter really made me sad hopefully he is just acting infornt of his country man
Author's Response:
Thank you! You'll just have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2023 11:54 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Sizey enemies to lovers hell yeah!
Author's Response:
Yep! A classic trope that never gets old. Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2023 5:19 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
If I were the both of them, I would keep their guard up. What if it turns out to be....pirates?
Author's Response:
It's certainly sound advice. Who knows what could be in that boat? :)
[Report This]Date: October 26 2023 2:51 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This story is very well written akin to any NYTimes best seller and very enjoyable at that. Thank You!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the high praise! I'll have to speak to someone at the Times to get my smut in the running lol.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2023 8:17 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Really hope this story isn't abandoned. It’s really great.
Author's Response:
It's not, I swear! I'm sorry for the long wait. I'm more than halfway through writing chapter 4 and hope to have it up sometime this weekend.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2023 1:38 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This is a great start. I am really intrigued by this premise. Its very interesting to see a situation like this where 2 enemies have to work together to survive in spite of their differences in size and allegiance. I am loving the dominance and authority Miriam is projecting over Lanz. Even though the story is supposed progress into a gentle love story, I would still love to see Miriam in action against some tiny soldiers like if a tiny scouting party arrived on the island and Miriam had to dispatch them before they could radio for help or Lanz found out.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. To be honest, there won't be much in the way of Miriam or Lanz combatting enemy forces outside of flashbacks or references to the war in dialogue.
Date: August 20 2023 8:50 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Long time lurker here, this story have won my first ever review. I loved your last story and am grateful to have found an author that sticks to their stories until they have told the entire story they set out to tell. I have long since been searching for a semi-gentle story that has the backdrop of tiny-giant war. I only know of one that made it to a conclusion and that was Invasion by Size Master. Since then nothing have cropped up on my radar. I’m truly grateful you have taken this concept and ran with it, I know I can expect great things from you, great work on the first chapter, it’s very engaging already!
Author's Response:
Wow, I'm honored! Thanks for letting me be your first. I'm glad my story happens to fit exactly what you've been looking for. I already have the entire ending planned out, so I can assure you that this story will reach its conclusion. I'm doing some reorganizing regarding the middle chunk of the story, so I'm not sure yet how long it's going to end up being besides knowing it'll have seven chapters minimum. I'll do my best to live up to your expectations.
Date: August 20 2023 5:12 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Alright! I'm hooked!
A mutual survival story, with our main characters starting on opposite sides of a war, and suddenly forced to work together to survive.
I really like how well you describe Miriam's physicality. She is well established as the strong and capable one, but she's emotional, inexperienced, and cracks under pressure. On the flip side we have a durable, but physically unimposing man who would be extremely hard pressed to accomplish anything that requires heavy lifting, but he's calm, rational, and more intimidating than his height could suggest. Both characters have a ton of potential for development, both in terms of spinning the tales of their respective backstories (I'm really looking forward to learning more about Lanz), as well as their opinions, outlooks, and worldviews.
I fully expect to Lanz assume some sort of mentor role. Whether its keeping Miriam on task, improving her capabilities / efficiency, or even just scratching a certain itch, I expect to see him pushing his way through Miriam's obstinacy.
I'm not seeing quite how Miriam is going to impact Lanz. She's in a good position right now to be the strong back for his ideas, but I'm hoping to see her impact Lanz's outlook or worldview.
I'm loving the descriptions - both sensory descriptions of setting, events, etc. and how you've chosen to portray the MC's.
I did have something of a knee-jerk reaction to the paragraphs of exposition, but if I'm being honest, I would say you framed it well. You were succinct, you times it well with the post-crash blackout, and the information was important and presented in a succinct manner. It could have been teased out later, sure, but the brief info dump provided important context for what was about to come.
All-in-all, I would consider this a strong start to the tale. I look forward to seeing how events unfold, and how the MC's grow as people.
Author's Response:
Thank you! You've pretty much hit the nail on the head with understanding the characters, and that makes me really happy because that means I'm doing my job right so far. I'm really sorry for the two paragraphs of exposition. I didn't realize how bad it was. I was hoping that since I started in the middle of the action and had it follow afterward that it would relieve some of issues typical of exposition dumps, but I guess a lecture is still a lecture no matter how succinct it is. Fortunately, that problem shouldn't occur again because I really just needed it to introduce the world and context; I'll make the effort to make future exposition more seamless. For the characters, definitely expect their backstories to be more gradually eeked out (Lanz in particular since his will be a bit more involved than Miriam's). I'm excited to get these characters' journey written down and to see how people react to the story as it progresses.
Date: August 19 2023 8:49 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This is a fantastic premise, something that I've seen before in other arenas, but not here on this site. I quite enjoy the portrayal of giantesses in physically demanding occupations, particularly that of soldiers and warriors. It gives an extra edge to their already dominating lethality. You do well describing in just how much Miriam is a physical beast that possesses a massive advantage over Lanz.
Of course, it's going to be the evolving character conflict and relationship between the two that's going to carry this story. The confrontation is set up well, and you are able to effortlessly disseminate the prejudices and distrust each has for the other. I don't know how long this story is going to be, and, as such, my only criticism would have been, instead of inserting in two paragraphs of standard exposition in the middle, you gradually reveal reasons for the conflict through Lanz and Miriam.
Already, we've got some really good action, with Miriam dropping her ten-ton iron clad dumptruck atop Lanz as they crash, and smothering him in her armpit as she ties her shoes. It's a great way, not just for general giantess action, but to also establish her authority over an enemy prisoner.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've been sitting on this premise for a while, and it feels great to finally get it started and written. Right now, this story is set to have seven chapters. I have the last three entirely planned out, it's the middle ones that I'm not certain of all the events and what order I present them in. Basically, this story's 80% figured out with some wiggle room left open in the middle. I do plan on expanding on the exposition, introducing it more naturally through dialogue and such. The two cutaway paragraphs were mainly to establish that this is a fantastical depiction of a world sort of based on reality (instead of taking place in an alternate history or straight and pure fantasy), but I understand that I could have introduced that stuff more seamlessly. I'm glad my characterization has pulled off since, as you said, that's going to be the driving force of this story.