This one was a fun one. Sometimes it was hard to follow where exactly Emil was on Vivian, I'd flesh out some of the descriptions with regards to that in future installments. On the other hand, it does keep the story moving, you don't want to get bogged up in excess descriptions.

I really like both characters, Emil's contemplative, if sedentary attitude, and Vivian's Alpha-dog go-getter view. A sweaty giantess workout is always going to be top-tier stuff on my list. You've established a very loving, mutually respectful relationship with these characters. I hope I get invited to the wedding.

P.S: Red eyes and white hair is a combo men of culture appreciate.