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Reviewer: Springer42 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2020 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Starrborough

That was really good. I like the scenario and Eryn is a great giantesses.

It might have been nice to see her take her time with the cities a bit more, but I liked the fact that she was primarily interested in just killing them and getting on with it - it showed just how irrelevant she thought they were.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Yeah I was planning to imply more at the start that Eryn's original plan was to just dump bleach in the vivarium (e.g. by mentioning something swishing in her backpack) However, I wanted that bit to be as much a surprise as possible, so I neglected to do so. Even while having fun with it, their signifiance to Eryn was mostly a means to get back at the sororities.

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