While viewing an interactive by the name of John's Fantastic Voyage on Writing.com, one direction the interactive went was this. Looking at this section and realising that it had potential, I decided that I would expained upon this. Not all of this is my writing but I made a lot of grammer fixes and edits to the origional, even adding on to what there was origionally. I also give credit to sith as it was he I found the idea from. This is my first story so I would appriciate comments and feedback, as well as if I should continue this. Don't forget, this is also a round robbin submittion. If you have a good idea on your mind and are interested in implementing it, go ahead. I would be highly interested to see what others could submit to make the story more interesting. If you do decide to add on, fair grammer is required, or I will delete the chapter. It is also incouraged to try and write a lot as oppose to just a few short sentences. Anyway, enjoy. Let the real summary begin:
You are John, an ordinary 19 year old guy, and you still live at home with your mother Hannah and your sisters, Amy (16 years) and Becky. And the most important fact...you have a nerdy friend named Aaron, a true genius in the field of science. He left a device in your care, this being a device you have no idea what the use of it is, but once it is used, it will change your life forever.
, Teenager (13-19)
, Body Exploration
NoneShrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
, Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)Size Roles: F/mWarnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
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