THE TANK

a story by the Lucky One

I don't know who built the tank. I'm not totally sure why the tank was built either, but over the days I've developed a pretty good idea.

I used to be a normal man, living a normal life, until something very weird happened. I met a really nice looking chick one day during my job as a waiter, and we hit it off really well. We met up after work, she went back to my place, we did what young normal healthy people do, and when I woke up I found myself here in the tank.

I didn't actually name this god forsaken chamber of hell. The name was here when I got here, along with about 500 other people, mostly young men but more than a few young women. I don't know how long the others have been here, but most of them seem to have a similar story to mine, ie they were living normal lives until they scored with this really hot chick and woke up here the next morning.

The tank looks like a large metallic box from the inside, which is admittedly the only side I've seen it from. It is somehow light inside, for a reason I can't explain, since there are no obvious light sources. There are large windows in the "roof", which I would estimate to be about 50 feet wide and 100 feet long, and about 100 feet above the ground.

The floor is made of the same yellow metal as the walls and the roof. The tank seems to be about a quarter mile square. The floor has no contours whatsoever except for a few bumps placed in regular patterns, each of which is about 6 inches high.

My fellow captives regale me with strange and bizarre stories, which is what I wish to write here, for the sake of record. The other people here are a little strange, probably driven mad by the lack of sensory stimulation here in the tank. No one eats or sweats or has any need for excretory function. The only physiological need that these poor souls seem to have left from the "outside world"(?) is sleep.

Anyway, I had become good friends with a man here named Jamie, who had apparently been here for a number of weeks, and believed himself to be the longest resident of the tank. Due to the length of time he had spent here, I didn't believe his stories until I saw one of them happen for real. To him.

Jamie told me about a giantess who tormented the inhabitants of the tank. Apparently the windows in the roof could be opened from the outside, and large parts of the roof could be made to fold back and or open, providing access to the tank from the outside. Through this method, I am told, I was delivered here, a giant window was opened without warning, and an
enormous female hand delivered me gently to the floor, asleep.

He said that the population of the tank is kept constant, and that every time a person is added, another is "removed". These "removals" were the strange and incredible part of his story, because apparently the giantess would slaughter one of the previous occupants in a sadistic and callous manner. He believed, and I later had this confirmed, that the giantess used the bumps in the floor to send an electric charge through the air, stunning the inhabitants of the tank. Each of us, he explained, have been somehow shrunk to the height of about an inch.

My arrival, he said, was followed by the removal of a young girl of about eighteen who Jamie knew to be named Louise.

He told the story like this. One of the windows in the roof was slowly opened. This always creates a storm of fear which jumps from inhabitant to inhabitant like chain lightning, because everyone knows that the windows are only opened when an arrival, and its consequent removal, will take place. I was lowered onto the floor. Suddenly Louise fell down as if shot, and Jamie could see her twitching body desperately struggle to crawl away. Everyone moved as far away from Louise as possible, abandoning her on the cold metal.

A window directly above Louise was opened, and a massive female foot was lowered through the gap. Jamie said that many people began screaming and crying at this moment. The foot was clearly that of a young woman, the nails were painted a pastel metallic grey with a thin gold chain wrapped around the slender ankle. the foot was perhaps fifty or sixty feet long, with each of the toes being the length of a man. He watched, transfixed, as it lowered itself to rest on the yellow metal beside Louise's slowly twitching body. Then it rose, and the toes were placed about forty feet away from Louise, the heel hovering
over her helpless body. Then, so slowly, the heel was lowered onto the young woman's body, crushing her like a strawberry. Jamie said that the body stopped twitching as the giantess' heel lowered itself onto it. Her body could be heard splitting at the sides from hundreds of feet away, a wet splatting sound that caused some of the inhabitants to vomit. Dull snapping sounds came from under the massive foot. Then the giantess lifted her toes into the air, adding pressure under the heel, and ground Louise's tiny body further, for what seemed like several minutes. All were silent. Then the giantess lifted her foot, revealing the body, which was little more than a husk of skin wet with blood in the midst of chunks of flesh and gore. The giantess stomped on the body a few times before withdrawing her foot through the window and closing it again.

Shortly after that Jamie met his fate at the whim of the cruel giantess. And I fear that I am next.

A window was opened one time. The giant feminine hand lowered a young boy gracefully to the ground. It was the first time I saw the giantess, and the terror I felt was like nothing on this Earth. Her hand was massive, so massive. The power and dominance that her hand represented froze me to the ground. I was awestruck at this huge form. My jaw dropped and I could only stare upwards. Through the window I could see her, the same girl that went home with me that night. She was wonderfully beautiful, with very German facial features, long, thin blonde hair and piercing blue eyes. Her lips were full and moist, and her teeth were perfect.

With one swipe she plucked Jamie up from right beside me and lifted him outside of the tank. The others ran away very quickly, leaving me standing beneath one of the windows. I looked up, still too awestruck to move, and saw Jamie lying on the glass, not more than 100 feet above me. Behind him I could see the face of the giantess, the goddess. She was looking at me.
then she spoke.

"Have I got your little friend here?" she asked in a strange accent which I couldn't place, but I sounded like somewhere in Northern Europe. Her voice was easily audible through the roof of the tank, it smashed through everything like a wave of thunder.

"He looks very scared." she said with a smile. I could see Jamie through the glass, he was not moving, presumably paralysed with the same hit of pure fear as me. With a smile she lowered her face almost to the glass. If she were the height of a normal woman I would be only two feet from her at the most. The position of her body showed me that she was lying on the tank.

"Time to say bye-bye." she laughed. All this time she gazed at me with those beautiful eyes. It felt like they were physically pinning me to the ground, as if she was so powerful that her very gaze could command other humans. I was paralysed with fear and a bizarre appreciation of this incredible beauty.

Still keeping her eyes fixed on me, she opened her mouth and closed her lips around Jamie. She sucked him into her maw. I could see her lips form a slight smile and she moaned "Mmmmmmmm...."

I realised that she was going to eat him. But she spat him out onto the glass again, his body clearly hurt by the fall.

"Or should I eat you instead?" she asked. I could hear a window opening. I could see the gigantic hand reaching through the roof towards me and I wet myself with fear.

But mercifully she removed it with a laugh and closed the window again. "No, it's not your turn yet."

She opened her mouth again, very wide. I could see the back of her throat, her tounge, whcih was the size of a school bus, and her teeth. She stuck out her tounge and began slowly licking Jamie. He struggled feebly, but I could see that the fear of being in her mouth had exhausted him and he had resigned himself to his fate.

She moaned again. "I'm going to eat your friend, little man. Eat him all up and swallow him so you'll never see him again."

I began shaking violently with fear. Still she pinned me with those eyes.

"I'm going to lick him into my wet mouth and crush him in my teeth." she smiled. I could see that she enjoyed watching the fear burn through my body like a bushfire everytime she spoke.

"I'm going to chew him up, crushing his little bones and brain. Then you'll be next."

Then she licked him up for good. Jamie's little body stuck to her giant tounge and he stopped struggling. Through one of the lower portals I saw a movement and I could see that she was fingering herself with the same hand that had almost plucked me up to that horrible fate.

She moaned as she drew him into her mouth. Her eyes closed with an unholy pleasure as she began chewing. I could her the soft, wet sounds of my friend's body as the giantess crushed and tore it between her teeth. I watched her jaw muscles contract and relax as she chewed, pulping Jamie's body.

Then she swallowed. She orgasmed at the same time because her face disappeared from view and she rolled over on the roof of the tank, screaming with a pleasure that was evident enough to haunt the inhabitants here for every further minute of their lives, knowing that such a fate awaited them all. She thumped the roof of the tank with her hands as her body squirmed
in ecstasy.

Then she rolled over again and looked at me with a smile. She opened her mouth wide. "Gone." she said, laughing. "I ate him. I ATE him."

She licked her teeth and lips just to show me that there was no trace of her prey, that he was gone forever. "I licked him up and ate him." she laughed at me. "Your friend, just food for me. He's in my belly now."

She sat up and laughed softly.

I wonder when my turn will come.